Too Ordinary
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Comment from vickib
Hey Doug I like this very much. I've been there. It's not a bad place is it? Nothing is too ordinary if you put your mind to it. Don't ask about that painting either. Lol! Kidding you, you can ask and I'll say, it's too ordinary you'll have to wait a little longer. See its all in the eyes of the beholder.
XO
Vicki
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Hey Doug I like this very much. I've been there. It's not a bad place is it? Nothing is too ordinary if you put your mind to it. Don't ask about that painting either. Lol! Kidding you, you can ask and I'll say, it's too ordinary you'll have to wait a little longer. See its all in the eyes of the beholder.
XO
Vicki
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Hi Baby Cakes! How's our-oops, I won't mention the painting thingy. :)
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You just never know one day I might surprise you. Hopefully in a good way with a painting. How about that drink have you made that yet?
XOV
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no (sheepishly replying)
Comment from evilynne
I did enjoy it. It seemed to flow along at nice pace with interesting images, but I admit I did not quite understand it.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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I did enjoy it. It seemed to flow along at nice pace with interesting images, but I admit I did not quite understand it.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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:)
Comment from chasennov
"Too Ordinary" This is an excellent poem you have created here. I enjoyed the read and found the narrative quite interesting. The structure you used was quite good too. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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"Too Ordinary" This is an excellent poem you have created here. I enjoyed the read and found the narrative quite interesting. The structure you used was quite good too. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Ben Colder
I like the photo. I enjoyed my stay in London. The change of guards and other sites. Your poem speaks loud. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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I like the photo. I enjoyed my stay in London. The change of guards and other sites. Your poem speaks loud. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2014
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Thank you, Ben.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Sometimes the simplest, most ordinary things in life bring the greatest pleasure and peacefulness. Wonderful poem.
Teresa
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Sometimes the simplest, most ordinary things in life bring the greatest pleasure and peacefulness. Wonderful poem.
Teresa
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from vfbryant
Enjoyed this very much. Loved the images you painted in this journey, especially when you wrote,
'tree house,
sitting time
poetry imprisoned
by structure'
That resonated particularly with me because I have been there.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Enjoyed this very much. Loved the images you painted in this journey, especially when you wrote,
'tree house,
sitting time
poetry imprisoned
by structure'
That resonated particularly with me because I have been there.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from Eric1
Excellent poem about being at peace with ones existence, I love your description of the thunderstorm it is unique, great free verse poem and I loved it!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Excellent poem about being at peace with ones existence, I love your description of the thunderstorm it is unique, great free verse poem and I loved it!
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Too Ordinary' is an extremely well-written and intriguing piece. This talented poet's work is far from ordinary, and was a pleasure to read and review.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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'Too Ordinary' is an extremely well-written and intriguing piece. This talented poet's work is far from ordinary, and was a pleasure to read and review.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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:)
!(~_~)!
Comment from OLA THOMAS
This is a well and nicely run poem, with a well tamed theme. Good linking of your thoughts that gives a final delivery of a well paced poem, with some occasional rhymes.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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This is a well and nicely run poem, with a well tamed theme. Good linking of your thoughts that gives a final delivery of a well paced poem, with some occasional rhymes.
ola thomas
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you.
Comment from Pili Pubul
Excellent poem about being comfortable with yourself
on an ordinary day , enjoying what is going on , love your imagery,
the " silent dusk , peaceful violence" a companion to you. Pili
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Excellent poem about being comfortable with yourself
on an ordinary day , enjoying what is going on , love your imagery,
the " silent dusk , peaceful violence" a companion to you. Pili
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2015
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Thank you.
