Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "Phone Games & Reunions"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
7 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
I don't know how I missed this chapter, but it was hilarious. Lots of puns and innuendoes, great dialogue. That was a cute getaway and it moved along fast. Good descriptive language and well written as always. Most enjoyable. Faye
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I don't know how I missed this chapter, but it was hilarious. Lots of puns and innuendoes, great dialogue. That was a cute getaway and it moved along fast. Good descriptive language and well written as always. Most enjoyable. Faye
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Love how they tricked stupid Barry, who THINKS he outsmarted them. The bard is such fun and does a great job here. I am SO GLAD that Angela is finally safe. Phew!
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Love how they tricked stupid Barry, who THINKS he outsmarted them. The bard is such fun and does a great job here. I am SO GLAD that Angela is finally safe. Phew!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from l.raven
Hi Michael, I did miss this one...boy do I ever love Bard...LOL...still chasing Barry...and he know has a different car...and Angela wants to save the kids...your doing great...not to worry...very well written you...Love it...Luff Linda xxoo
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Hi Michael, I did miss this one...boy do I ever love Bard...LOL...still chasing Barry...and he know has a different car...and Angela wants to save the kids...your doing great...not to worry...very well written you...Love it...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from Sankey
Missed you mate and there I was having all the fun with MIkey I Likey hehe! Another good chapter glad you are back have missed the Bard in your yard hehe haha! Some spags or suggestions...Suggestions:
Mrs. Bleaker had a job that had worn (-at) her (+out) over the years.
"She's just here to help them, honey. They can't live her(e) like this.
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Missed you mate and there I was having all the fun with MIkey I Likey hehe! Another good chapter glad you are back have missed the Bard in your yard hehe haha! Some spags or suggestions...Suggestions:
Mrs. Bleaker had a job that had worn (-at) her (+out) over the years.
"She's just here to help them, honey. They can't live her(e) like this.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Finally!! I have really missed this. So pleased to see you back on line and posting your book. Typical drama and humor mix. Strong characters mean any of them can take over a scene and keep the interest level high. That is the key to the freshness of this book.
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Finally!! I have really missed this. So pleased to see you back on line and posting your book. Typical drama and humor mix. Strong characters mean any of them can take over a scene and keep the interest level high. That is the key to the freshness of this book.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Hey, a lot of live action went down. I especially liked the Elvis bobble head. This chapter was full of wit and humor. I was entertained from beginning to end. What more can I ask for. Reading is for self satisfaction, it's fundamental. You SPAG looks tight. I'm loving the pictures, especially that fracking car stuck up in the tree. That girl can pick me up anytime! Well, she is nineteen. Not sure, if this is your new post. i can't find them. Good day! Count your doubloon.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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Hey, a lot of live action went down. I especially liked the Elvis bobble head. This chapter was full of wit and humor. I was entertained from beginning to end. What more can I ask for. Reading is for self satisfaction, it's fundamental. You SPAG looks tight. I'm loving the pictures, especially that fracking car stuck up in the tree. That girl can pick me up anytime! Well, she is nineteen. Not sure, if this is your new post. i can't find them. Good day! Count your doubloon.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014
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This is it. I started to post it a week ago when everything crashed so there wasn't any current notice. Glad you liked. Thanks for the chest of doubloons. Me likes!! mikey
Comment from country ranch writer
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Hahaha. These aren't supposed to be released. I just was reserving the spots on my phone. Internet down. Glad to see you are feeling better!!!
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he he figured that
