Solitude Was Made For One
rhyming quatrains in 7/5/7/5139 total reviews
Comment from evilynne
The poem is lovely, very true, and touches the heart; the background story is also very touching and the photo is most endearing.
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The poem is lovely, very true, and touches the heart; the background story is also very touching and the photo is most endearing.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Evi, thank you so much for your generous rating and thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Andrewajgblue
The story in this poem came through really strong, you highlight the difference between sharing your life with someone and been alone, your wording was perfect and it flowed so effortlessly, and the picture is super cute :)
Andrew
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The story in this poem came through really strong, you highlight the difference between sharing your life with someone and been alone, your wording was perfect and it flowed so effortlessly, and the picture is super cute :)
Andrew
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
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Andrew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rrabinow
I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the use of description in your poem. Great flow in your poem. I love the picture that you used as well. Great job.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the use of description in your poem. Great flow in your poem. I love the picture that you used as well. Great job.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
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rrabinow, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dean Kuch
I liked how you gave both solitude and love a color designation in your first stanza, Brooke. Interesting...
I also enjoyed the touching, sugary-sweet sentiment of the message overall.
Well done.
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I liked how you gave both solitude and love a color designation in your first stanza, Brooke. Interesting...
I also enjoyed the touching, sugary-sweet sentiment of the message overall.
Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Dean :-) Brooke
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Sure. :)
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so sweet, (I'm talking about Sawyer now) words like that from your child is worth millions in the bank, no contest. What a lovely poem, Brooke, very suitable after what Sawyer said to Miranda. Doesn't it make you take a deep breath and smile? Poem and author notes, lovely! xsx sandra
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That is so sweet, (I'm talking about Sawyer now) words like that from your child is worth millions in the bank, no contest. What a lovely poem, Brooke, very suitable after what Sawyer said to Miranda. Doesn't it make you take a deep breath and smile? Poem and author notes, lovely! xsx sandra
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Sandra - yep, smile and smile and then smile some more :-) Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
Awww. An excellent story, and a great poem to match the mood and the photo. Solitude is a lonely place, which is something that I'm sure Sawyer doesn't experience often.
The poem is beautifully written, but a little sad, like solitude can be. Especially if one would rather have someone to share their solitude with - a paradox, I'm sure.
Rose.
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Awww. An excellent story, and a great poem to match the mood and the photo. Solitude is a lonely place, which is something that I'm sure Sawyer doesn't experience often.
The poem is beautifully written, but a little sad, like solitude can be. Especially if one would rather have someone to share their solitude with - a paradox, I'm sure.
Rose.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
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Rose, thank you so much, my thoughtful friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
Hard to leave such thick atmosphere of love. Well done Brooke. Beautiful capture of mother and child. Yep, Sawyer, Grandmother done it again. Blessing to all.
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Hard to leave such thick atmosphere of love. Well done Brooke. Beautiful capture of mother and child. Yep, Sawyer, Grandmother done it again. Blessing to all.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
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Ben, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from vfbryant
What a precious moment. Any mother or grandmother can grasp the incredible gift a little one can bestow by demonstrating love as simply and sincerely as you describe. It's a gift one never forgets. You describe it well.
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What a precious moment. Any mother or grandmother can grasp the incredible gift a little one can bestow by demonstrating love as simply and sincerely as you describe. It's a gift one never forgets. You describe it well.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
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Thank you so very much, vfbryant, for your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from N.M Bernia
Great work! It mostly rhymes which gives it a nice flow. The picture is perfect and I enjoyed the author notes: you don't see that much in children these days. It's refreshing to read about the simplicity of children as the complexities of life tick by with the clock :)
Keep up the good work. God bless.
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Great work! It mostly rhymes which gives it a nice flow. The picture is perfect and I enjoyed the author notes: you don't see that much in children these days. It's refreshing to read about the simplicity of children as the complexities of life tick by with the clock :)
Keep up the good work. God bless.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, N.M., for your encouragement. Brooke :-)
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You are very welcome :D
Comment from Angel Debbie
This is a special write on Solitude. It flows well and the rhymes are great. The picture is adorable.
Thank You for sharing this wonderful gift of Love with me. It's appreciated.
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This is a special write on Solitude. It flows well and the rhymes are great. The picture is adorable.
Thank You for sharing this wonderful gift of Love with me. It's appreciated.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2014
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Angel Debbie, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
