Solitude Was Made For One
rhyming quatrains in 7/5/7/5139 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
The work and the picture and note are not as well matched
as usual. Bright, heartwarming stuff-and then the poem is a
sober little fellow. None of this has to do with the quality of the writing: excellent.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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The work and the picture and note are not as well matched
as usual. Bright, heartwarming stuff-and then the poem is a
sober little fellow. None of this has to do with the quality of the writing: excellent.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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LIJ, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from jennyindy
Brooke,
Fabulous rhyming quatrains that highlight the blessings of companionship. The flow and cadence are so compatible that it is very easy to read, and read aloud.
As wonderful as this is, I have to say your shared expression in the author's notes deserve a six as well. What a sweet moment. That is a picture of true love!
Jenny
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Brooke,
Fabulous rhyming quatrains that highlight the blessings of companionship. The flow and cadence are so compatible that it is very easy to read, and read aloud.
As wonderful as this is, I have to say your shared expression in the author's notes deserve a six as well. What a sweet moment. That is a picture of true love!
Jenny
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Jenny, thank you so very much for your generous and encouraging response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from costellsgirl33
"Solitude was made for one --
love was made for two"
I love it!
This is a sweet and heart-warming poem.
And I love your author notes! Sawyer is such an adorable little boy!
Great job as always
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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"Solitude was made for one --
love was made for two"
I love it!
This is a sweet and heart-warming poem.
And I love your author notes! Sawyer is such an adorable little boy!
Great job as always
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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thank you, costellsgirl, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome :)
CG
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Brooke,
Charmingly philosophical
Solitude is what remains,
when love is left behind.
Those little beggars can really tug at the heart strings, can't they. My wife and I are still waiting for a great grand child, but so far, our worthless grandsons have refused to cooperate.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Dear Brooke,
Charmingly philosophical
Solitude is what remains,
when love is left behind.
Those little beggars can really tug at the heart strings, can't they. My wife and I are still waiting for a great grand child, but so far, our worthless grandsons have refused to cooperate.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Reg, thanks for the laugh and for the review. Tell you grandsons your friend in Valley Forge has told them to get to work and multiply to make their grandparents happy!! Brooke :-)
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Such a deep meaningful poem, Brooke...
words, rhythm and rhyme flowing perfectly...
and the story is an extra bonus - so cute indeed!!
Margaret
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Such a deep meaningful poem, Brooke...
words, rhythm and rhyme flowing perfectly...
and the story is an extra bonus - so cute indeed!!
Margaret
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Margaret, thank you so very much, my friend :-) I appreciate your generosity and hope you are doing well :-) Brooke
Comment from jadapenn
Aw, solitude is a sorry state to be in. Good for Sawyer that he cuddles up with Mommy to watch the movie. So much nicer to do things in two. I loved this little poem. It gives a brilliant lesson. Well penned. luv jada
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Aw, solitude is a sorry state to be in. Good for Sawyer that he cuddles up with Mommy to watch the movie. So much nicer to do things in two. I loved this little poem. It gives a brilliant lesson. Well penned. luv jada
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Jada, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from ILovePoetry!
Wow! Wow! Wow! I love how you portrayed love vs. solitude with their opposing natures. Solitude is a lack of love - quite clearly illustrated through this poem. The rhyme is not boring at all and the use of opposites is a nice new way to write this poem. Cleverly done! Beautiful!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Wow! Wow! Wow! I love how you portrayed love vs. solitude with their opposing natures. Solitude is a lack of love - quite clearly illustrated through this poem. The rhyme is not boring at all and the use of opposites is a nice new way to write this poem. Cleverly done! Beautiful!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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ILovePoetry, thank you so very much for your generous and gracious response to my poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Eric1
This is a wonderful homely poem Brooke, it has a great flow thanks partly to the great rhyming,you are so right about loneliness being the only thing left when love is leftv behind.
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This is a wonderful homely poem Brooke, it has a great flow thanks partly to the great rhyming,you are so right about loneliness being the only thing left when love is leftv behind.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Eric, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome Brooke, relly enjoyed this one!
Comment from GWinterwin
Good poem with a good picture to tell of solitude. Good word flow and rhyming as you relate how solitude and love are very different.
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Good poem with a good picture to tell of solitude. Good word flow and rhyming as you relate how solitude and love are very different.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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GWinterwin, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from LoannaLois
This is just how I feel sometimes. Your words and echoing work beautifully together. You are such a gifted writer. I think I like the ideas you build on best...The repetition of solitude was a solid choice.
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This is just how I feel sometimes. Your words and echoing work beautifully together. You are such a gifted writer. I think I like the ideas you build on best...The repetition of solitude was a solid choice.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2014
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Lois, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
