Solitude Was Made For One
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Comment from Victoria K
Beautiful as always :)
I love the images you assign to both love and solitude. For love, blooms of gold and rising sun. For solitude, blue rainy days. This is very effective in illuminating your message.
The back story to the poem is so sweet!
Victoria
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
Beautiful as always :)
I love the images you assign to both love and solitude. For love, blooms of gold and rising sun. For solitude, blue rainy days. This is very effective in illuminating your message.
The back story to the poem is so sweet!
Victoria
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Victoria, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Drew Delaney
That is so cute, Brooke. Is this your first grandchild?
This poem is so good. You just seem to be so gifted. It's like you don't even have to work on it. How long do I have to save my six stars, do you know?
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
That is so cute, Brooke. Is this your first grandchild?
This poem is so good. You just seem to be so gifted. It's like you don't even have to work on it. How long do I have to save my six stars, do you know?
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Drew :-) Yes, he is my one and only :-) You can only give the same writer four stars in a 30 day period, so you have to wait 30 days from the first one you gave. Brooke
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I guess you meant six stars in a 30 day period. Thanks for telling me that. I had no idea.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Brooke,
What a heartwarming story! So nice of you to share it with us. Kids can do and say the neatest thing.
We were at the dog races one time when the boys were 5 & 7. Bo, the 5-yr old, right in the middle of the snack area said, 'Mom, I love you'....Yep, I floated for quite a while!('-')
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
Hi Brooke,
What a heartwarming story! So nice of you to share it with us. Kids can do and say the neatest thing.
We were at the dog races one time when the boys were 5 & 7. Bo, the 5-yr old, right in the middle of the snack area said, 'Mom, I love you'....Yep, I floated for quite a while!('-')
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Jax, thank you so much for your review and for sharing that lovely story :-) Brooke
Comment from Lacy Mariah
I must say, I thought this poem was beautiful. I love the picture you put along with it, adds a personal touch. I think you're comparisons of love to solitude are absolutely right, beautiful in symbolism, and at the same time very literal. I just keep reason it over and over again. Great words:)
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
I must say, I thought this poem was beautiful. I love the picture you put along with it, adds a personal touch. I think you're comparisons of love to solitude are absolutely right, beautiful in symbolism, and at the same time very literal. I just keep reason it over and over again. Great words:)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Lacy, for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
What do I love more, the moving delicious Sawyer loving words to his mom
or your terrific poem? It is a problem to answer, let's say they both
moved me , both are so loving and your poetic gift shines. Pili
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
What do I love more, the moving delicious Sawyer loving words to his mom
or your terrific poem? It is a problem to answer, let's say they both
moved me , both are so loving and your poetic gift shines. Pili
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Pili, thank you so much for your generous response to my poem :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome. Smiles. Pili
Comment from angelface2
Aw, Brooke. Loved the note. He is such a sweetheart. The poem is so right. Solitude is for one. I've been feeling it for the last few days! Don' like solitude! thanks for sharing. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
Aw, Brooke. Loved the note. He is such a sweetheart. The poem is so right. Solitude is for one. I've been feeling it for the last few days! Don' like solitude! thanks for sharing. Miss Sally
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Miss Sally, thank you so much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was another great poem. I liked the comparison of love and solitude. I love the author notes. "You're so cute... It even made this grandma teary eyed. Great poem and story.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
This was another great poem. I liked the comparison of love and solitude. I love the author notes. "You're so cute... It even made this grandma teary eyed. Great poem and story.
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Gretchen, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from granny goes viral
Once again, and why am I not surprised, you hit the nail on the head. Oh yes, very gently as is you style, wouldn't want to damage either hammer, nail piece of whatever the nail was nailing. Lovely poem..lovely reason for poem.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
Once again, and why am I not surprised, you hit the nail on the head. Oh yes, very gently as is you style, wouldn't want to damage either hammer, nail piece of whatever the nail was nailing. Lovely poem..lovely reason for poem.
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Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Granny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from reconciled
-headshake-....yes maam...brilliant write Brooke...-smile-...flows impeccably well, easy as breathing....your author notes...wow...such a beautiful love. alright....love Michael
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
-headshake-....yes maam...brilliant write Brooke...-smile-...flows impeccably well, easy as breathing....your author notes...wow...such a beautiful love. alright....love Michael
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Michael, thank you so much, my generous friend :-) Brooke