Solitude Was Made For One
rhyming quatrains in 7/5/7/5139 total reviews
Comment from SilverWoulfCreations
Very sweet sentiment here. So cute and heart touching. Your work is well formed and conveyed clearly your thoughts on love and solitude. I enjoyed it. Thank you for the share here.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
Very sweet sentiment here. So cute and heart touching. Your work is well formed and conveyed clearly your thoughts on love and solitude. I enjoyed it. Thank you for the share here.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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SilverWoulf, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
Brooke this makes me tears eyed too...my grandson ran up to his daddy yesterday and clasped his leg and said I love you daddy....aren't they adorable....oh I love this poem
God bless
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
Brooke this makes me tears eyed too...my grandson ran up to his daddy yesterday and clasped his leg and said I love you daddy....aren't they adorable....oh I love this poem
God bless
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Jenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Trybuck
Grandbabies have their way
of making you cry with a smile
of turning your frowns into giggles
of making your day complete
There's not much solitude to be found with grandbabies around...
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
Grandbabies have their way
of making you cry with a smile
of turning your frowns into giggles
of making your day complete
There's not much solitude to be found with grandbabies around...
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Buck, for your thoughtful and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
Miranda is stealing your time. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
Miranda is stealing your time. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Charlie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie
Comment from lancellot
Okay, this is awesome. It is so real and so true. You have tapped into what loneliness and solitude actually are. They vacuums of space without love to fill them. This is excellent!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
Okay, this is awesome. It is so real and so true. You have tapped into what loneliness and solitude actually are. They vacuums of space without love to fill them. This is excellent!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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lancellot, thank you so much for your gracious and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Acquired Taste
Brooke - believe it's made many of us teary. Love the photo.
I thoroughly enjoy the poem only I don't see the correlation with the photo. It's all in the eye of the beholder. That said, it rhymes beautifully and - as always - flows easily off the tongue. Perhaps my mood this evening, but I find it somewhat sad. Go figure. Jean
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
Brooke - believe it's made many of us teary. Love the photo.
I thoroughly enjoy the poem only I don't see the correlation with the photo. It's all in the eye of the beholder. That said, it rhymes beautifully and - as always - flows easily off the tongue. Perhaps my mood this evening, but I find it somewhat sad. Go figure. Jean
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Jean, thank you so much :-) What can I say, the photo inspired the poem :-) Brooke
Comment from flylikeaneagle
27 July 2014
Adewpearl: I am saving my sixes for you. Excellent rhymes and love shines. More fun to have children so close to you, keeps you younger. Solitude is what happens when people don't treasure the little ones being close. Your family and photos are sweet.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
27 July 2014
Adewpearl: I am saving my sixes for you. Excellent rhymes and love shines. More fun to have children so close to you, keeps you younger. Solitude is what happens when people don't treasure the little ones being close. Your family and photos are sweet.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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flylikeaneagle, thank you so much for your generous and gracious response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, I love it. Solitude may be nice for a time, but
love is better. I like the two better than being alone.
What a sweet story about Sawyer.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
Brooke, I love it. Solitude may be nice for a time, but
love is better. I like the two better than being alone.
What a sweet story about Sawyer.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Jude, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from royowen
There's nothing better than a cuddly grandchild, quite often my little granddaughter crawls up on my lap or my wife's, and it is the most peaceful and comforting feeling, Sawyer is a very cute boy! Loved your offering Brooke! Nice abcb rhyming, even meter! Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
There's nothing better than a cuddly grandchild, quite often my little granddaughter crawls up on my lap or my wife's, and it is the most peaceful and comforting feeling, Sawyer is a very cute boy! Loved your offering Brooke! Nice abcb rhyming, even meter! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2014
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Roy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
I like the repetition of love is/solitude is and that you give them both equal attention. I loved your author notes. How sweet! I'm sure Sawyer has heard his Mom tell him that many times and now it came back to her:)
teresa
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
I like the repetition of love is/solitude is and that you give them both equal attention. I loved your author notes. How sweet! I'm sure Sawyer has heard his Mom tell him that many times and now it came back to her:)
teresa
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Teresa, thank you so much :-) Brooke