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Little Surprises

This poem is inspired by communications with my toddler.

3 total reviews 
Comment from granny goes viral
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When I stop laughing, I can more carefully craft a review.
Wait...still laughing.O.K., now just chuckling. Did baby take off diaper to "poop behind couch"? Just wondering. This is really delightful. Amazing how we can understand baby talk.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2014

Comment from kiwijenny
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I teach preschool and I love this poem...little surprises...
Well done........sweet babble,,,poop behind the couch...
Lol the joys of motherhood.......
Well done ..I miss those days
God bless

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2014

Comment from rrabinow
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Great job with your haiku. I like the flow if your poem. Great use of description. Best if luck.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2014