Seeds of Life
blank verse - iambic pentameter50 total reviews
Comment from krys123
Teresa;
you are right on with your tempo and meter your rhythms handed pentameter is spot on. The rhyming is also exceptional done and neither of your rhymes are forced nor labored while your rhythm flows so smoothly throughout your poem.
Your spirit showing imagination is truly inventive and ingeniously creative And imagery that you portray in capture in your poem is demonstratively descriptive and elegantly expressive throughout.
Your poem has the delegates a very inspirational and and lightning topic are you becalmed that profit and the Lords hands and mouth to teach every one of his word. A miraculous gift to become one of his prophets.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this gracious home for everyone to read and may all your future endeavors because good is this one.
Alex
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Teresa;
you are right on with your tempo and meter your rhythms handed pentameter is spot on. The rhyming is also exceptional done and neither of your rhymes are forced nor labored while your rhythm flows so smoothly throughout your poem.
Your spirit showing imagination is truly inventive and ingeniously creative And imagery that you portray in capture in your poem is demonstratively descriptive and elegantly expressive throughout.
Your poem has the delegates a very inspirational and and lightning topic are you becalmed that profit and the Lords hands and mouth to teach every one of his word. A miraculous gift to become one of his prophets.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this gracious home for everyone to read and may all your future endeavors because good is this one.
Alex
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you Alex. Blessings.
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You are so sincerely welcome Teresa
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a nice metaphorical blank verse about a person being the seed of God's message of love and hope for the world. It is well put together and an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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This is a nice metaphorical blank verse about a person being the seed of God's message of love and hope for the world. It is well put together and an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thanks Bill;)
Comment from Drew Delaney
As far as I can tell, this works for me. No rhymes but the 10 syllable count is there. I like the subject matter, the cadence and the metaphor - I am that seed. Well written!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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As far as I can tell, this works for me. No rhymes but the 10 syllable count is there. I like the subject matter, the cadence and the metaphor - I am that seed. Well written!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much:)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your poem. It flowed perfectly. I enjoyed the message. We can plant seeds of faith in others, but we may never know it they grow. God does know.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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I enjoyed reading your poem. It flowed perfectly. I enjoyed the message. We can plant seeds of faith in others, but we may never know it they grow. God does know.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much. You are so right.
Comment from Acquired Taste
Very uplifting poem reaffirming your unwavering faith.
I think your choice of the seedling photo is perfect and if only we were able to see the growth in people the way we do with the seedling.
We would know when they were in need of extra spiritual food!
AT=/
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Very uplifting poem reaffirming your unwavering faith.
I think your choice of the seedling photo is perfect and if only we were able to see the growth in people the way we do with the seedling.
We would know when they were in need of extra spiritual food!
AT=/
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Some people would have no growth at all unfortunately. thanks for the positive review:)
Comment from kiwijenny
Thanks for author notes...we are studying a book in Bible Class called the seed promise....I t looks at the parable of the sower and applies it to our lives...this is what your poem reminded me of...well done
God bless
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thanks for author notes...we are studying a book in Bible Class called the seed promise....I t looks at the parable of the sower and applies it to our lives...this is what your poem reminded me of...well done
God bless
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much:) I'm glad it reminded you of your Bible study lessons.
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Did I mention how much I liked the poem...TMR Too Much Reviewing :o)
Comment from Andrewajgblue
A beautiful poem, we are all indeed seeds of life, needing love and support to grow, a great message written so well , gorgeous wording and rhythm, well done,
Andrew
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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A beautiful poem, we are all indeed seeds of life, needing love and support to grow, a great message written so well , gorgeous wording and rhythm, well done,
Andrew
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much Andrew:)
Comment from lappmellott
I just love this poem and I don't think you could have chosen a more poignant photograph than the one you used. I've not tried a blank verse poem yet. Perhpas I will soon.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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I just love this poem and I don't think you could have chosen a more poignant photograph than the one you used. I've not tried a blank verse poem yet. Perhpas I will soon.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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thanks for the great review. I took a class here on it. It was harder than I thought - no rhyme any where - internal, end, proximate, nothing. I do have a proximate end rhyme in needs/me but no one has said anything yet.
Teresa
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You're welcome.
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Well done and the message is brilliant, an age old message of the growth life pattern of a seed as applied to we who are the real seeds of life to carry on that life to the ends of the world inclusive of everyone.
The poem follows the form and the beat; it also reads well and makes understanding if the first 4 beats of each line are read down to the last line & restarted up above on the first with the last 4 beats of each sentence down to the last line. A fun poem.
I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Well done and the message is brilliant, an age old message of the growth life pattern of a seed as applied to we who are the real seeds of life to carry on that life to the ends of the world inclusive of everyone.
The poem follows the form and the beat; it also reads well and makes understanding if the first 4 beats of each line are read down to the last line & restarted up above on the first with the last 4 beats of each sentence down to the last line. A fun poem.
I didn't see any spelling or grammatical errors.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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thanks so much:)
Comment from Ben Colder
Had a six left it would be yours. Wow, a great up lifting of faith in out Heavenly Father. Well done poet. Do it again. Blessings
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Had a six left it would be yours. Wow, a great up lifting of faith in out Heavenly Father. Well done poet. Do it again. Blessings
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much Ben for the great review and thought of the six!!
