Seeds of Life
blank verse - iambic pentameter50 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Seeds of Life is a lovely blank verse poem Teresa. I enjoyed the progression of your well written theme. Great picture to enhance your thoughtful words. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Seeds of Life is a lovely blank verse poem Teresa. I enjoyed the progression of your well written theme. Great picture to enhance your thoughtful words. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for the great gift of the six!!
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You are most welcome...
Comment from GWinterwin
What a pretty poem about the seeds of life. Good word flow and rhyming make it easy to read, and understand. Thanks for sharing a poem with a great message.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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What a pretty poem about the seeds of life. Good word flow and rhyming make it easy to read, and understand. Thanks for sharing a poem with a great message.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thanks for the great review:)
Comment from rmj09
This is an excellent poem, the rhythm of it moves us ever forward. The descriptiveness of the poem tells a story of how much the writer loves the Lord.
Keep writing
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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This is an excellent poem, the rhythm of it moves us ever forward. The descriptiveness of the poem tells a story of how much the writer loves the Lord.
Keep writing
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for the gift of the six!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Teresa - This is a lovely faith poem which you write so well. You use some good metaphor in 'I am that seed.....' - 'On ocean's waves I scatter words of God' - lovely words and good use of metaphor. An all round good poem. Kind regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Hi Teresa - This is a lovely faith poem which you write so well. You use some good metaphor in 'I am that seed.....' - 'On ocean's waves I scatter words of God' - lovely words and good use of metaphor. An all round good poem. Kind regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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thank you for the kind review Dorothy:)
Comment from tbacha58
On ocean's waves I scatter words of God
and send them all across the lands to those
whose pain ferments in troubled thoughts galore
and let them know that God is ev'rywhere.
Hi T. Beautiful description again of nature human beings souls when in trouble to turn towards the beauty that God created for us to live with the richness of love. Love the picture T. Beautiful poem. Love u Terry xoxo
Stars from Montreal to shine above you. xoxo
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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On ocean's waves I scatter words of God
and send them all across the lands to those
whose pain ferments in troubled thoughts galore
and let them know that God is ev'rywhere.
Hi T. Beautiful description again of nature human beings souls when in trouble to turn towards the beauty that God created for us to live with the richness of love. Love the picture T. Beautiful poem. Love u Terry xoxo
Stars from Montreal to shine above you. xoxo
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you Terry:)
Comment from adewpearl
you avoid rhyme well
excellent use of iambic meter in good blank verse form
effective use of imagery in delivering a thoughtfully spiritual message
Brooke
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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you avoid rhyme well
excellent use of iambic meter in good blank verse form
effective use of imagery in delivering a thoughtfully spiritual message
Brooke
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you Brooke:)
Comment from Emeka13
This poem has movement in it. I love the progression - first you speak of a seed and how it grows, then you are a seed and at maturity you spread your seed (the word of God) to those who need to know. Good work, well presented. Thanks for sharing. Emeka
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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This poem has movement in it. I love the progression - first you speak of a seed and how it grows, then you are a seed and at maturity you spread your seed (the word of God) to those who need to know. Good work, well presented. Thanks for sharing. Emeka
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thanks for the great review:)
Comment from rrabinow
I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the flow of your poem. Great use of description, that creates great imagery. I like the picture that you used as well. Wonderful poem.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the flow of your poem. Great use of description, that creates great imagery. I like the picture that you used as well. Wonderful poem.
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Can you tell me why only 4 stars then? what can I do to improve. I don't mind getting 4 stars if the reviewer tells me how to improve. Thanks for the review.
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I meant to click 5....sorry about that mistake.
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It can be changed.
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How?
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Just click on the title of the poem and change the rating and then click save. Thanks:)
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You are welcome.
Comment from lakeport
Seeds of life, indeed that's a beautiful and very inspirational expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Seeds of life, indeed that's a beautiful and very inspirational expressed poem.I enjoyed reading it. God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much:)
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your welcome,Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from Cin
I think your poem has depicted in a refreshing way the analogy of 'the seed of life' - I particularly like the persona of 'rooting my feet into the ground'
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I think your poem has depicted in a refreshing way the analogy of 'the seed of life' - I particularly like the persona of 'rooting my feet into the ground'
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Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much:)
