Seeds of Life
blank verse - iambic pentameter50 total reviews
Comment from Leineco
Great use of the blank form cadence Teresa. . .it reads through like a dream :-)
And the message is a wonderful analogy for the burgeoning of life and growing into the fruition of spreading new seeds of life :-)
Nice write!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Great use of the blank form cadence Teresa. . .it reads through like a dream :-)
And the message is a wonderful analogy for the burgeoning of life and growing into the fruition of spreading new seeds of life :-)
Nice write!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much:)
Comment from RGstar
A good unusual take. I like the way you identify yourself in personalizing or making reference to the plant. This poem of faith depicts the many ways we are able to transcend and allow inner strength for the higher power to be professed.
Elements of old , using the ocean and land with the quenching of thirst patterns of phrases frequent in Elizabethan and religious poems of that era.
Good write,
RG
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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A good unusual take. I like the way you identify yourself in personalizing or making reference to the plant. This poem of faith depicts the many ways we are able to transcend and allow inner strength for the higher power to be professed.
Elements of old , using the ocean and land with the quenching of thirst patterns of phrases frequent in Elizabethan and religious poems of that era.
Good write,
RG
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you RG:)
Comment from zanya
A metaphorical reflection on our place in the Cosmos - and our relationship with the God of the Universe - sometimes we forget how significant we are
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A metaphorical reflection on our place in the Cosmos - and our relationship with the God of the Universe - sometimes we forget how significant we are
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much for the great review:)
Comment from chasennov
blank verse - iambic pentameter "Seeds of Life" This is a very good poem you have created here. I like the way you show the seed planted and the growth of it to reach the heavens up above. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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blank verse - iambic pentameter "Seeds of Life" This is a very good poem you have created here. I like the way you show the seed planted and the growth of it to reach the heavens up above. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you for the kind review:)
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You are welcome.
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love the imagery of the seed and the ocean scattering the seeds across the lands. Great metaphor. The theme was wonderful and visual. nicely done. Good luck with your writing.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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I love the imagery of the seed and the ocean scattering the seeds across the lands. Great metaphor. The theme was wonderful and visual. nicely done. Good luck with your writing.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much:)
Comment from Lulube
This poem sounds like a missionary's vows to God. The calling to spread the word of God. To give to another by whatever means is your passion that also gives back to you. Feels good to reach someone that is troubled and be of some help. whether through the word of God or with the current information that will make a difference for this person in need.
Good debatable topic. whatever fills your soul is your way, I say.
lulube
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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This poem sounds like a missionary's vows to God. The calling to spread the word of God. To give to another by whatever means is your passion that also gives back to you. Feels good to reach someone that is troubled and be of some help. whether through the word of God or with the current information that will make a difference for this person in need.
Good debatable topic. whatever fills your soul is your way, I say.
lulube
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much:)
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
This truly is a well-written poem. It deserves a six, especially for the second paragraph. It's what life's about!
Sorry though, I don't have any sixes left.
But great job!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)/~KAUSAR~(^_^)
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Hello there~!
This truly is a well-written poem. It deserves a six, especially for the second paragraph. It's what life's about!
Sorry though, I don't have any sixes left.
But great job!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)/~KAUSAR~(^_^)
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thanks for the great review and the thought of six:)
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. I am (almost back). We are at the mother-in-law's and then tomorrow drive home.
Just checking in while I have a connection.
Good job on this style, it is not easy to get right...and you did get it right.
It is a good style for this message, it moves softly and still makes a point.
Hope you are well,
padumachitta
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Hi. I am (almost back). We are at the mother-in-law's and then tomorrow drive home.
Just checking in while I have a connection.
Good job on this style, it is not easy to get right...and you did get it right.
It is a good style for this message, it moves softly and still makes a point.
Hope you are well,
padumachitta
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you Padumachitta for the great review. I hope your vacation was restful, beautiful and wonderful:) I hope that the mother-in-law's is a good place to be.
Comment from TFBN
A well thought out poem. A simple theme that shines throughout. I like the flexibility of this type of poem. Hope to read more of your writings. Loved it!
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A well thought out poem. A simple theme that shines throughout. I like the flexibility of this type of poem. Hope to read more of your writings. Loved it!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much:)
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
I did feel a sense of the dramatic in this poem along with the evangelical desires of the writer. I thought it was well written with efficient meter and was a cohesive idea. Giddy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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I did feel a sense of the dramatic in this poem along with the evangelical desires of the writer. I thought it was well written with efficient meter and was a cohesive idea. Giddy
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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thanks Giddy:)
