Pool
a 5-7-54 total reviews
Comment from lindalcreel
Thank God my husband takes care of our pool. He tried to show me how to add chlorine tablets, and we have a valet cleaning system, so it should be easy enough, but I have to say he keeps the water sparkling and with the heater we can swim all year round. Hubby is doing a great job. Sorry if I'm ranting, but this reminded me of why I keep him around.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank God my husband takes care of our pool. He tried to show me how to add chlorine tablets, and we have a valet cleaning system, so it should be easy enough, but I have to say he keeps the water sparkling and with the heater we can swim all year round. Hubby is doing a great job. Sorry if I'm ranting, but this reminded me of why I keep him around.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Linda, for the excellent review. The pool is both my albatross and white whale.
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My pleasure:)
Comment from krys123
Bill;
I find your 5/7/5 syllabic format to be very amusing to the fact that it took you long enough to clean your swimming pool. And your imagination was really inventive and creative in this poem and your imagery was very descriptive than expressive throughout especially when you wrote that you started in May and got done by Labor Day.
Thank you for sharing this Bill with everyone to read and may all your endeavors be good ones.
Alex
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Bill;
I find your 5/7/5 syllabic format to be very amusing to the fact that it took you long enough to clean your swimming pool. And your imagination was really inventive and creative in this poem and your imagery was very descriptive than expressive throughout especially when you wrote that you started in May and got done by Labor Day.
Thank you for sharing this Bill with everyone to read and may all your endeavors be good ones.
Alex
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Alex, for giving this a look.
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You are so sincerely welcome Bill.
Comment from TOMORAL
Hahaha! This is funny. A perfectly rhymed 5-7-5 and tells a funny story. I've a feeling this happens more often than not. Thanks and great job, poet!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Hahaha! This is funny. A perfectly rhymed 5-7-5 and tells a funny story. I've a feeling this happens more often than not. Thanks and great job, poet!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Tomoral, for giving this a look.
Comment from c_lucas
Cleaning the pool had to take a back seat to taking in some rays. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Cleaning the pool had to take a back seat to taking in some rays. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Charlie, for giving this a look.
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You're welcome, Bill. Charlie
