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Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
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l.raven
OMG...damn Junior...spend all that money for a cell phone... and he doesn't answer the damn thing...LOL...so glad they saved the girls...and Angela...and Elsa got hers...it's not to later to catch Barry...Michael...go get him...your the only one that can....LOL...go...go....this was one of the best chapters...but I love them all...very well written ....as always...Luff Linda xxxx
I meant to tell you...you have...answering machine....son...the have Angel...did you mean They..have Angel...not that I even care...but some do!!!luff
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
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nelliesellie
I love the pictures. Especially the red haired lady with a gun. Angela kept her promise. She helped get Elsa. Now, her father should be jailed. He is too dumb. He is dangerous. I hope they get Barry. He hid behind too many people. Let him be a man and take his licks. Great work.
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