Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

You are absolutely right, great message which may wake up some complacent ones. I am nice to everyone, I get so upset when I see miserable faces who like to inflict pain on others, as you wrote. Lovely words and rhymes to convey your message. Super illustration and most enjoyable read. Faye

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014

Thank you so very much, my friend. ~Debbie

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Excellent poem that ask a very important question Yes, what has happened to our nation. The falling away? perhaps but I bet God is paying attention. Thanks for sharing. Shalom.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014

I am sure He is. Thank you so very much, my friend. ~Debbie

Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

Truer words have not been spoken lately. I am in total agreement. When they removed the Commandments and God from our schools and government offices, we started our quick road to hell in the proverbial basket.

Well done. AT=/

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014

Thank you so very much, my friend. ~Debbie

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Exceptional

I simply love it... and wish that was all I had to say. :-)
The beginning letter is so effective and the message is without flaw. Love you my friend, Carolyn

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014

Thank you, my friend. Hugs~Debbie

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Five stars, but I have a suggestion.
"We have allowed it to tarnish."
Remember Johnnie Hart's infamous quote:
"The Rule, Golden: Whoever has the gold makes the rules.

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 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi Debbie,

You are so right. I remember having assembly in school where we prayed. Didn't have to go if it wasn't your religion. Yet, the minority are ruling what the Christian majority can do. Nothing fair and/or proper about that one. AMEN!

Very well done, my friend.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax


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 Comment Written 23-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2014

Thank you, my friend~Debbie