She Holds My Interest
Complete surrender comes one step at a time21 total reviews
Comment from gypsycaravan
You will NEVER know her. She is a woman and we change moment to moment. Interesting that you were able to relate through a lifetime together and still be at the starting point. Yes, you made it humorous, you made it in 50 words. Great job.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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You will NEVER know her. She is a woman and we change moment to moment. Interesting that you were able to relate through a lifetime together and still be at the starting point. Yes, you made it humorous, you made it in 50 words. Great job.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2014
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Thank you...nice to know some reviewers read with understanding.:)
Comment from BlueFlag
funny
I have to see the rest before voting
have a good day and good luck in the contest
worthy of my 5 star review
have a nice day
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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funny
I have to see the rest before voting
have a good day and good luck in the contest
worthy of my 5 star review
have a nice day
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from mfowler
Oh, man. You have described the dilemna so many guys face; how to get to know your woman - I mean, know deeply. After 55 years, you should. You probably won't. It's funny in a kind of bitter sweet way. Good Luck. (in the contest, I mean - lol)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Oh, man. You have described the dilemna so many guys face; how to get to know your woman - I mean, know deeply. After 55 years, you should. You probably won't. It's funny in a kind of bitter sweet way. Good Luck. (in the contest, I mean - lol)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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"You probably won't" got that right...but that's what holds my interest. Thank you for reading and commenting!
Comment from rrabinow
I enjoyed reading your story. Great job with your 50 word story. I like the flow of your story. It has a great start, middle and end. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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I enjoyed reading your story. Great job with your 50 word story. I like the flow of your story. It has a great start, middle and end. Best of luck.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you, your time reading and commenting are appreciated.
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You are welcome.
Comment from liz10240
There are many good entries here, but yours is the one that "held my interest." If after 55 years, she is still that mysterious to you, she is obviously doing something right. Alot was conveyed in 50 words and I enjoyed this very much. Good luck n the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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There are many good entries here, but yours is the one that "held my interest." If after 55 years, she is still that mysterious to you, she is obviously doing something right. Alot was conveyed in 50 words and I enjoyed this very much. Good luck n the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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"If after 55 years, she is still that mysterious to you, she is obviously doing something right." Yours is the best review and tells me you really know how to read...and think! Thank you!
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You are very welcome :)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
What a fun rundown of a lifetime togethr is so few words. Great job.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Hi,
What a fun rundown of a lifetime togethr is so few words. Great job.
Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you Jax, much appreciated.
Comment from royowen
I guess the humour lies in that she's smarter than him, and that's what makes the marriage work, and that's probably true of some marriages, but hey, she must really love him, because he doesn't sound all that interesting! Good entry in this 50 word writing prompt, I enjoyed its cleverness, good luck, well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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I guess the humour lies in that she's smarter than him, and that's what makes the marriage work, and that's probably true of some marriages, but hey, she must really love him, because he doesn't sound all that interesting! Good entry in this 50 word writing prompt, I enjoyed its cleverness, good luck, well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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This is based on my relationship with my wife and I think you assessed it correctly. Thanks!
Comment from l.raven
LOL...this is a tough contest...I love story ...very well told...55 years ....how wonderful...and of course she is smarter...she a woman...LOL...great write...very well written
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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LOL...this is a tough contest...I love story ...very well told...55 years ....how wonderful...and of course she is smarter...she a woman...LOL...great write...very well written
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Luffly Linda...your insight is appreciated!
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you are so welcome Dennis...xxoo
Comment from Leineco
I like that the final line ended up over to the left. . .as far as I was concerned "Still don't know her" was the quintessential ending :-)
Very nicely done :-)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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I like that the final line ended up over to the left. . .as far as I was concerned "Still don't know her" was the quintessential ending :-)
Very nicely done :-)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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Thank you, it's great to know there are reviewers who actually READ AND THINK.:)
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the story. I love the picture. You do not know her. You have been married 55 years. She has kept your interest. I think it is because she does something different every time you think you know her. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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I love the story. I love the picture. You do not know her. You have been married 55 years. She has kept your interest. I think it is because she does something different every time you think you know her. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2014
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You got it! Just when I think I know her...back to square one! Thanks for really reading...and commenting!
