If There Were Only Just We Two
A Triolet147 total reviews
Comment from skye
Triolets are fun because of the repeating lines. You captured the whole love of a mother for her child, or two people who cherish one another.
Excellent poem. Fantastic family.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Triolets are fun because of the repeating lines. You captured the whole love of a mother for her child, or two people who cherish one another.
Excellent poem. Fantastic family.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Skye, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from flylikeaneagle
22 July 2014
Adewpearl: Excellent and loving of the last of you together. Savoring memories being made now...life. So many parents ignore their children and they are begging for attention. Treasure your precious family. I love your inspiration and thoughts of life.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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22 July 2014
Adewpearl: Excellent and loving of the last of you together. Savoring memories being made now...life. So many parents ignore their children and they are begging for attention. Treasure your precious family. I love your inspiration and thoughts of life.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, flylikeaneagle. My daughter and her husband dote on Sawyer. I like that they still hire a babysitter once in a while so they can have a date night, but other than that, they are all about their precious little boy :-) Brooke
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Brooke: Thanks for sharing your photos and thoughts with us. Keeps us all young. My daughters are in high school and college. I am their helicopter mom. Everyone should spend time together, family is our first mission. Life is precious and love is the greatest...sorry about preaching. My degree is in advertising so I am learning from you and others at FS. Thanks for your edits and thoughts too. I teach Christian Education to the youth, spend time with youth at horse camps and traveling.
Adewpearl, it is a honor to know you. Thank you so much!!!
flylikeaneagle
Comment from chasennov
If There Were Only Just We Two.' What a lovely Triolet you have created here, Brooke. If there were only just we two remaining on this planet Earth, I'd savor life for all its worth. How beautiful is that? Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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If There Were Only Just We Two.' What a lovely Triolet you have created here, Brooke. If there were only just we two remaining on this planet Earth, I'd savor life for all its worth. How beautiful is that? Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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chasennov, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are most welcome, Brooke.
Comment from rod007
There is a magical rhythm to this poem that repeats with great impact the bond of love and adoration between mother and son. This poem should be written under your family album of this picture. Well done, Brooke.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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There is a magical rhythm to this poem that repeats with great impact the bond of love and adoration between mother and son. This poem should be written under your family album of this picture. Well done, Brooke.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
Wow! They seem to be having such a good time, those two!
I like the repeated lines in the triolet. I think the rhyme scheme changes in the second half, too. It's an interesting form. Good luck in the contest, Brooke.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Wow! They seem to be having such a good time, those two!
I like the repeated lines in the triolet. I think the rhyme scheme changes in the second half, too. It's an interesting form. Good luck in the contest, Brooke.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Adrienne - yes, a form I really like :-) Brooke
Comment from Nosha17
A lovely togetherness poem, precious time for Mum and son. I am sure in the eyes of a child, his world consists of those he loves and that is sufficient for him. Well chosen words and rhymes to convey your thoughts and super pic as always. Faye
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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A lovely togetherness poem, precious time for Mum and son. I am sure in the eyes of a child, his world consists of those he loves and that is sufficient for him. Well chosen words and rhymes to convey your thoughts and super pic as always. Faye
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Faye, thank you so much for your insightful reading of this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from costellsgirl33
That is a lovely picture! They both look so happy!
Your poem is wonderful. It's very sweet and filled with love!
I really enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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That is a lovely picture! They both look so happy!
Your poem is wonderful. It's very sweet and filled with love!
I really enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Costellsgirl, my heart melts every time I see the two of them celebrating life and each other :-) Brooke
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That is very sweet Brooke :)
CG
Comment from Andrewajgblue
This is a great entry into the triolet contest, it was very honest and sincere, and your repeat line reinforced the message at the end, rather than it just been a repeat of the first line, well done and good luck
Andrew
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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This is a great entry into the triolet contest, it was very honest and sincere, and your repeat line reinforced the message at the end, rather than it just been a repeat of the first line, well done and good luck
Andrew
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Andrew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, what a wonderful triolet. A great job on this
one for the contest. I love the message. It's so
sweet. An adorable picture of Sawyer and his mom.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Brooke, what a wonderful triolet. A great job on this
one for the contest. I love the message. It's so
sweet. An adorable picture of Sawyer and his mom.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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heyjude, thank you so very much for your generous and gracious response to this triolet. Two of the three people dearest to my heart in one picture - life doesn't get much better :-) Brooke
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How very true. I love those memories we can catch in pictures and in our hearts. Judy
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Brooke,
It's me again (trying to keep on top of things for a change). This is so sweet. It reminds me of when my sister had her first baby and used to sing 'You and me against the world.' I realize your sentiments aren't the same as my sister's, and that you are celebrating a loving bond, not expressing angst.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Hi Brooke,
It's me again (trying to keep on top of things for a change). This is so sweet. It reminds me of when my sister had her first baby and used to sing 'You and me against the world.' I realize your sentiments aren't the same as my sister's, and that you are celebrating a loving bond, not expressing angst.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Lou, thank you so much :-) I think my daughter is the bestest mom planet Earth has ever produced, and I'm so proud of her :-) Brooke
