Summer Prayers
These are a few of my favorite things......46 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Continuous convert to her mysteries
maybe continues to convert
or continuous conversion
Glad your health is improving and thank you for sharing these beautiful images, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Continuous convert to her mysteries
maybe continues to convert
or continuous conversion
Glad your health is improving and thank you for sharing these beautiful images, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thanks for stopping by and reviewing, Debbie. Caroline
Comment from Deniz22
Nothing like an escape from stress to enliven the senses. The grass is greener, the breezes' more welcome and the warmth of the sun permeates all. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Nothing like an escape from stress to enliven the senses. The grass is greener, the breezes' more welcome and the warmth of the sun permeates all. Well done!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thanks, Dennis! Caroline
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Comment from Christine B.
One of the most gentle and beckoning pieces I have read that sings about the lonesome place between life's allure and death's still bag of bones. Let me live, let me live before my toes are stuck beside those who expired before, the words reflect. Very compelling!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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One of the most gentle and beckoning pieces I have read that sings about the lonesome place between life's allure and death's still bag of bones. Let me live, let me live before my toes are stuck beside those who expired before, the words reflect. Very compelling!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Wow Christine--You really connected with the ambivalence I felt about maybe leaving the world, appreciating what the world gives. Your line about "the lonesome place between life's allure and death's still bag of bones is terrific. Is it original? If so, you must make it a poem! Thanks! Caroline
Comment from Just2Write
A little bit of garden grace and the wisdom to let it be absorbed into your soul. It's such a wonderful experience, and yes, sometimes it takes a frightening situation to make us really SEE and really FEEL the awesomeness of a garden.
My garden offers me so much solace - and I am a slave of summer - I absolutely worship her.
Your Free Verse captures your epiphany well. One can feel how much you savoured the experience. It is spoken in such a comforting voice - I just had to read it a couple of times to drink it in.
Rose.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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A little bit of garden grace and the wisdom to let it be absorbed into your soul. It's such a wonderful experience, and yes, sometimes it takes a frightening situation to make us really SEE and really FEEL the awesomeness of a garden.
My garden offers me so much solace - and I am a slave of summer - I absolutely worship her.
Your Free Verse captures your epiphany well. One can feel how much you savoured the experience. It is spoken in such a comforting voice - I just had to read it a couple of times to drink it in.
Rose.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thanks, Rose! You speak my mind about gardens and summer. However, if I had had a health scare in winter, I think I would have felt the same angst for a different season. thanks for your kind remarks.
Comment from TAB_that's me
I wouldn't change a thing - perfect as it is - full of great vivid imagery - you get my last six for the week:) I love all of those things too. I'm glad your crisis is past:)
Teresa
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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I wouldn't change a thing - perfect as it is - full of great vivid imagery - you get my last six for the week:) I love all of those things too. I'm glad your crisis is past:)
Teresa
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thanks, Teresa! I appreciate the stars and your comments. Caroline
Comment from A Matter Of Words
I am glad to hear that your health scare has passed. What a wonderful bloom that has been opened by it. The graceful sentiments you have expressed in this poem is absolutely beautiful.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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I am glad to hear that your health scare has passed. What a wonderful bloom that has been opened by it. The graceful sentiments you have expressed in this poem is absolutely beautiful.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. caroline
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You are very welcome, Caroline. I wish you the best....Stephanie
Comment from RGstar
Deep and nicely written. Superb choices of nouns and adjectives.
A superb coalition of hope and thanks.
We dwell and appreciate, yet thoughts are many.
A lovely write.
Beat wishes,
Have a great day,
RGstar
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Deep and nicely written. Superb choices of nouns and adjectives.
A superb coalition of hope and thanks.
We dwell and appreciate, yet thoughts are many.
A lovely write.
Beat wishes,
Have a great day,
RGstar
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for the specific comments and kind thoughts. Caroline
Comment from c_lucas
The lazy, hazy days of summer with the birds choral renditions. The couch of the warm earth. This is very well written making for a good read.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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The lazy, hazy days of summer with the birds choral renditions. The couch of the warm earth. This is very well written making for a good read.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thanks, Lucas! Caroline
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You're welcome. Caroline. Charlie
Comment from Bryan G
This is a beautiful poem. I have found solace in the arts since my bout with cancer. Your theme of savoring the everyday things of life is the key to survival. Words cannot express the source of hope that comes from taking the time to commune with God and nature. Indeed let us be born again in the summer sky and let the flowers of peace grow in our souls.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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This is a beautiful poem. I have found solace in the arts since my bout with cancer. Your theme of savoring the everyday things of life is the key to survival. Words cannot express the source of hope that comes from taking the time to commune with God and nature. Indeed let us be born again in the summer sky and let the flowers of peace grow in our souls.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Bryan- this is such a sweet and thoughtful response to my poem. You are right about the gift of nature when we are suffering in anyway. It is the only constant in my life. Thanks again. I hope your bout with cancer is over. Caroline
Comment from Quire's Gal
Uh, wow. That's all I can say. This is an exceptional example of free verse. You spin some stunning lines and phrases loaded with poetic imagery. If I started quoting my favorites, I'd just be copying the whole poem.
I'm going to bookcase this and becomea fan. Thanks for a stunning write,
Drusilla!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Uh, wow. That's all I can say. This is an exceptional example of free verse. You spin some stunning lines and phrases loaded with poetic imagery. If I started quoting my favorites, I'd just be copying the whole poem.
I'm going to bookcase this and becomea fan. Thanks for a stunning write,
Drusilla!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Drusilla--I am grateful for your specific comments, and am thrilled to have you as a fan. Thanks so much for your support.
