Comment from Muffins

Excellent

Catchy story about the powers of fate. Sometimes we think change is a bad thing and nothing good can come from it. Your dad seeing your mother and then producing you is proof that change is good.

The 50 words story has a strong beginning, middle and end. It's a long story that is condense enough to provoke emotion from the readers.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014

Thanks, Muffins, for reading and for such nice words.

Comment from MAB

Excellent

What a twist and turn of events! YES ILOVE THIS! very heartfelt and quite romantic and a beautiful story of irony and joy. Im glad you shared this Vinny.
The picture is well fitting as well. God Bless



SAM

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014

Thanks, Sam, for reading and that kind review.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi VinnyCasso,

Nice little story. The only thing, is I missed the connection with the story and the title. Your story doesn't reference a diary.

Otherwise, I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.

Cheers * Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014

Thanks Jax. I appreciate your reading and taking the time to review.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Vinnie this is great my mum was the same way....hated farm life....guess where she ended up.....on an orchard ...sort of a farm....
Clever use of fifty words
God bless

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014

Thanks, kiwijenny, for your review and the kind words.

Comment from mjac777

Excellent

Wonderful write. You managed to tell a heartwarming story using only 50 words. Amazing feat.
This is a strong contender for the contest.
Good luck.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014

Thanks. mjac777, for reading and for the kind review.