Logical reason
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Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi Pili,
No truer words have been spoken. War defies all reason and logic. I'm a disabled Vietnam vet, so been there and done that. Forty-five years later, it still makes no sense to me. the horror it brings to the innocent is inexcusable. You have summed up those feelings in a few short but very emphatic words. Excellent writing!
Alan
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Hi Pili,
No truer words have been spoken. War defies all reason and logic. I'm a disabled Vietnam vet, so been there and done that. Forty-five years later, it still makes no sense to me. the horror it brings to the innocent is inexcusable. You have summed up those feelings in a few short but very emphatic words. Excellent writing!
Alan
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for such meaningful comment, no you can never forget a war. But my admiration and respect is with you my friend. Pili
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Muchas gracias, mi amiga!
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No hay de que mi amigo. Smiles. Pili
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Thank you! And you are welcome.
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LOL you are welcome too.. Pili
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Wow. Sorry I have no six for you. This is emotional and very moving. The first thing I thought of was Vietnam and images from that era. Then, more current events came to mind. War is horrible and these poor children don't have a chance. Great and important work here. Take care.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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Wow. Sorry I have no six for you. This is emotional and very moving. The first thing I thought of was Vietnam and images from that era. Then, more current events came to mind. War is horrible and these poor children don't have a chance. Great and important work here. Take care.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2014
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I am deeply grateful for your support and great comment. Pili. ( is truly since humanity exists).
Comment from 9999pool
Against reason and logic, the terror and agonizing fears of war and bloodshed around the world continues unabated. Even the United Nations is impotent and unless the world leaders can come together for a more concerted effort and plans, the warring nations and thousands of innocents will die needlessly.
Great rhetoric write about the horror of death by murder happening today.
Great write and well expressed.
Cheerio, hugs and luv, bro Ritchie. :))
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Against reason and logic, the terror and agonizing fears of war and bloodshed around the world continues unabated. Even the United Nations is impotent and unless the world leaders can come together for a more concerted effort and plans, the warring nations and thousands of innocents will die needlessly.
Great rhetoric write about the horror of death by murder happening today.
Great write and well expressed.
Cheerio, hugs and luv, bro Ritchie. :))
Comment Written 01-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2014
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Thank you so much for a very meaningful comment... Hugs. Pili
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This is really an interesting and a rhetorical piece of writing. We must come together, to show we all care and loved life - whatever it takes.
Have a lovely weekend.
Keep smiling and laugh more.
Cheerio, hugs and luv, bro Ritchie. :))
Comment from words
So beautifully wrought.
I can not understand why the mothers of the earth do not rise up and put an end to these senseless wars. The suffering is always too high of a price to pay.
Hugs,d
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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So beautifully wrought.
I can not understand why the mothers of the earth do not rise up and put an end to these senseless wars. The suffering is always too high of a price to pay.
Hugs,d
Comment Written 30-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2014
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My son told me just in Congo five and a half million dead, we don't hear much about them , not oil I guess... Thank you so much my friend I wish that would help if done... But doubt it... Hugs and thank you for your comment and six star. Love.
Comment from A Matter Of Words
To start with...I love the picture opening this work. The words of the poem, strike hard trying to understand the senselessness of the what happens everyday in this world. Beautifully written.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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To start with...I love the picture opening this work. The words of the poem, strike hard trying to understand the senselessness of the what happens everyday in this world. Beautifully written.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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My gratitude for your very meaningful comment. Pili
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You are most welcome. Your poem is so timely, given the devastating events going on in the world right now.
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Yes, you are right my friend , is heartbreaking. Pili
Comment from ravenblack
As logical reason dies- I think it is already dead. The Ukraine, Gaza, Isis- it seems as if the world has gone insane. Just a few suggestions- "wounded souls/trembling shadows"- wounded souls are trembling shadows under fire or become or simply wounded souls tremble shadows under fire. Also, logic and reason are basically the same thing. I would just use either logic or reason.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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As logical reason dies- I think it is already dead. The Ukraine, Gaza, Isis- it seems as if the world has gone insane. Just a few suggestions- "wounded souls/trembling shadows"- wounded souls are trembling shadows under fire or become or simply wounded souls tremble shadows under fire. Also, logic and reason are basically the same thing. I would just use either logic or reason.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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The world has been insane since humanity exists. Thank you so very much for your helpful suggestions and meaningful comments. Pili
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Pili - a very good though sad free verse - well written. We will never understand life's mysteries - it is the nature of the world. Excellent picture. I wish you good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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Hi Pili - a very good though sad free verse - well written. We will never understand life's mysteries - it is the nature of the world. Excellent picture. I wish you good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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You are so right Dorothy, thank you so very much. Pili
Comment from dennis0530
This is writing about the unresolved differences of humanity that frequently gets "settled" at the cost of lives. Scattered families, orphans, widows and destruction of homes and communities being the other collateral damage.
Until man learns to resolve their differences by peaceful means, thess insane actions will result in continued disruption of lives.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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This is writing about the unresolved differences of humanity that frequently gets "settled" at the cost of lives. Scattered families, orphans, widows and destruction of homes and communities being the other collateral damage.
Until man learns to resolve their differences by peaceful means, thess insane actions will result in continued disruption of lives.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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It has happen since humanity exists, unfortunately . Thank you so much for a meaningful comment. Pili
Comment from Singin' in the Rain
Good content. Lots of feeling. Great topic. To give a positive answer and ending to the poem would ruin the mood you ceated, but I wish it were possible!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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Good content. Lots of feeling. Great topic. To give a positive answer and ending to the poem would ruin the mood you ceated, but I wish it were possible!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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Possibly most humanity wants peace, but in human history it has not yet happen
unfortunately. Thank you for a terrific comment. Pili
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
Yep, you described life in all in naked appeal and reality! Life not always seems as we were told as children. What you did was give a message that life "s*&$s and then you die!" This is what everyone should learn
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Yep, you described life in all in naked appeal and reality! Life not always seems as we were told as children. What you did was give a message that life "s*&$s and then you die!" This is what everyone should learn
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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I believe most people want peace, but since the beginning of human history
was never global peace. Powerful and meaningful comment, thank you so much. Pili
