Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Chapter DOS, Part DOS"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
55 total reviews
Comment from L.M.Mullins
And the plot begins to thicken. I like the way you opened with the naming of the folds, the duties of a ranch and then added more suspense to Jim with weapons and vehicle.
LM
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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And the plot begins to thicken. I like the way you opened with the naming of the folds, the duties of a ranch and then added more suspense to Jim with weapons and vehicle.
LM
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Quite a ways behind in your story, but I'm determined to catch up. Now that I'm finished with my novella, I'll have more time to review. I really like your story. Love the Native American aspect. Great intrigue with the mysterious "G" man.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Quite a ways behind in your story, but I'm determined to catch up. Now that I'm finished with my novella, I'll have more time to review. I really like your story. Love the Native American aspect. Great intrigue with the mysterious "G" man.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you for reading back.
Comment from Lynette Marie
The plot thickens, as they say. Excellent dialogue. I love the character of the grandfather. He doesn't say much, but what he says is important. He is so wise, and the others seem to hold him in much respect. Intriguing story line.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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The plot thickens, as they say. Excellent dialogue. I love the character of the grandfather. He doesn't say much, but what he says is important. He is so wise, and the others seem to hold him in much respect. Intriguing story line.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Cajungirl
Jim's vehicle had lots of interesting things; high powered guns, bullet proof vest and that all so important little notepad. Wonder if Soni will make a copy before she turns it over? Excellent chapter.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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Jim's vehicle had lots of interesting things; high powered guns, bullet proof vest and that all so important little notepad. Wonder if Soni will make a copy before she turns it over? Excellent chapter.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
The run of this chapter and the story line suits me so much. I love your plot and the dialogues, neat and clean. The details in the post is enough to let a reader into the story line.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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The run of this chapter and the story line suits me so much. I love your plot and the dialogues, neat and clean. The details in the post is enough to let a reader into the story line.
ola thomas
Comment Written 24-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from chasennov
Chapter 4 of the book Texas Dream Catcher Jim's vehicle is found. "Chapter DOS, Part DOS" This is one of your chapters I have not reviewed before, and this story is good, as good as any other. Well done, Barbara.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Chapter 4 of the book Texas Dream Catcher Jim's vehicle is found. "Chapter DOS, Part DOS" This is one of your chapters I have not reviewed before, and this story is good, as good as any other. Well done, Barbara.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
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You are always very welcome, Barbara.
Comment from Sonaleeka
New chapters easy to follow the story.Holding the interest of reader through out the reading.I am glad get chance to read your writing .Worth reading.
God bless!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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New chapters easy to follow the story.Holding the interest of reader through out the reading.I am glad get chance to read your writing .Worth reading.
God bless!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Twilightspire
I didn't spot any mistakes that you made while enjoying the read. It was very descriptive with great dialogue and pacing.
The story is easy to follow and the characters stand off the page.
I love the accurate descriptions and names of the weapons and specific type of vehicle (a Suburban). It's those details that really make or break a story.
Great job.
-T.J.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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I didn't spot any mistakes that you made while enjoying the read. It was very descriptive with great dialogue and pacing.
The story is easy to follow and the characters stand off the page.
I love the accurate descriptions and names of the weapons and specific type of vehicle (a Suburban). It's those details that really make or break a story.
Great job.
-T.J.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from LIJ Red
I read this at my usual speed, and I didn't see any of the errors you mentioned, but since this is the first chapter I've read, I could not have spotted tactical errors in the who what when category. Seems excellent to me.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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I read this at my usual speed, and I didn't see any of the errors you mentioned, but since this is the first chapter I've read, I could not have spotted tactical errors in the who what when category. Seems excellent to me.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I didn't note any errors. It looks fine to me. Are there really mountain lions down there? We have occasional coyotes, no lions though. I think you are doing fine with this story. So far, so good. Have a great evening, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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I didn't note any errors. It looks fine to me. Are there really mountain lions down there? We have occasional coyotes, no lions though. I think you are doing fine with this story. So far, so good. Have a great evening, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. Yes, there are and last year they even jumped over fences into people yards and killed their little dogs. I've not heard that this year, yet.
