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Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Reflections."Mostly romance.
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Comment from Diny
lost words
cling to the stars.
I see no lost words here... I think you must pluck the stars nightly to inspire you... Very good again and great picture as well
You never dissapoint !
Blessings
Diny
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lost words
cling to the stars.
I see no lost words here... I think you must pluck the stars nightly to inspire you... Very good again and great picture as well
You never dissapoint !
Blessings
Diny
Comment Written 30-Aug-2005
Comment from Storyweaver
Hi Pili, this is a very soothing and interesting write, some great imagery and unique phrasing. I enjoyed the read and the calm feeling attatched.
~Weaver.
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Hi Pili, this is a very soothing and interesting write, some great imagery and unique phrasing. I enjoyed the read and the calm feeling attatched.
~Weaver.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2005
Comment from DySaintDrama
You and Zen Bud remind me of each other in your writing styles and use of imagery. I liked:
"Shadows
silently
floating
on my mind,"
the best. Write on. Jeff
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You and Zen Bud remind me of each other in your writing styles and use of imagery. I liked:
"Shadows
silently
floating
on my mind,"
the best. Write on. Jeff
Comment Written 30-Aug-2005
Comment from Seancuig
A voice
quivers
forlorn
in yesterday's
warm breeze.
I love that image. It is so evocative and conjurs up such a sense something magical.
Another super read Pili.
What did I like? The poem :-)
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A voice
quivers
forlorn
in yesterday's
warm breeze.
I love that image. It is so evocative and conjurs up such a sense something magical.
Another super read Pili.
What did I like? The poem :-)
Comment Written 30-Aug-2005
Comment from Dreamdancer
Wow...
Awesome write Miss Pili:-) It seems that a lot of the writers on site are being reflective of memories. Yours is one of the best I have read tonight. One of those Ahhhh... poems that I like so much. Thanks for sharing... Buddy
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Wow...
Awesome write Miss Pili:-) It seems that a lot of the writers on site are being reflective of memories. Yours is one of the best I have read tonight. One of those Ahhhh... poems that I like so much. Thanks for sharing... Buddy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2005
Comment from Bryana
Beautiful reflections my friend, very peaceful
and lovely.
Songs
filled the night
from far away,
lost words
cling to the stars.
Un abrazo, Ana
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Beautiful reflections my friend, very peaceful
and lovely.
Songs
filled the night
from far away,
lost words
cling to the stars.
Un abrazo, Ana
Comment Written 30-Aug-2005
Comment from sengwriter
A pensive mood still belongs and memories murmers those warm feelings of the past.
Lines are just touching to every heart who gets into this poem sereously. I want to see you as a poet of joy again, your pains are reflected and in proper magnitude it enriched your poem to express your mood at present.
Be it your ideas of fantasy, I still always love to feel the mood as the poet's own. So don't defy or tell me that I'm misunderstood.
Gautam
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A pensive mood still belongs and memories murmers those warm feelings of the past.
Lines are just touching to every heart who gets into this poem sereously. I want to see you as a poet of joy again, your pains are reflected and in proper magnitude it enriched your poem to express your mood at present.
Be it your ideas of fantasy, I still always love to feel the mood as the poet's own. So don't defy or tell me that I'm misunderstood.
Gautam
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
Comment from bayley
Tremendous expression of a soul deep in reflective thought. Again you bring together the human aspect with the spiritual elements. Your mind and your body are touched by the sensations and experiences. I love the way you effortlessly link body and soul, Wonderful ~Sean
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Tremendous expression of a soul deep in reflective thought. Again you bring together the human aspect with the spiritual elements. Your mind and your body are touched by the sensations and experiences. I love the way you effortlessly link body and soul, Wonderful ~Sean
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
Comment from goldendragkyn
Nice artwork!
Wow. I was starting to feel..I don't know...Sad? Reading this poem. It's not the type I usually read, but good job! I don't think I'd change anything.
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Nice artwork!
Wow. I was starting to feel..I don't know...Sad? Reading this poem. It's not the type I usually read, but good job! I don't think I'd change anything.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
Comment from Winbow
"Songs
filled the night
from far away,
lost words
cling to the stars."
My soul echoing,
beckoning the words
to come down
caress me and unite.
Two voices
singing as one,
rejoicing,
the magnificence
of life
that,
which has been.
Anticipating
that which is
yet to come.
Great poem. Beautiful flow and imagery. I love the pic.
Your poem just makes me want to keep writing and writing. That, I'd say dear Poetess, is the work of an artist. Well Done!
Take Care
Desiree
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"Songs
filled the night
from far away,
lost words
cling to the stars."
My soul echoing,
beckoning the words
to come down
caress me and unite.
Two voices
singing as one,
rejoicing,
the magnificence
of life
that,
which has been.
Anticipating
that which is
yet to come.
Great poem. Beautiful flow and imagery. I love the pic.
Your poem just makes me want to keep writing and writing. That, I'd say dear Poetess, is the work of an artist. Well Done!
Take Care
Desiree
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
