From our soul.
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Reflections."Mostly romance.
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Comment from Ben Colder
Wish I had a six for this poem.
This is the strength of the write, my opinion only.
A voice
quivers
forlorn
by yesterday's
soft whispered nights
Thank you for sharng.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Wish I had a six for this poem.
This is the strength of the write, my opinion only.
A voice
quivers
forlorn
by yesterday's
soft whispered nights
Thank you for sharng.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much Ben , meaningful choice. Pili
Comment from RGstar
And so beautiful is the soul. Undefined yet flows within our mind as a river blue that is never ending. Memories linked though cannot be defined, just the haunting of a voice, a sound, a time.
Lovely write.
Best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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And so beautiful is the soul. Undefined yet flows within our mind as a river blue that is never ending. Memories linked though cannot be defined, just the haunting of a voice, a sound, a time.
Lovely write.
Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Love your very poetic review, thank you so much RG. Pili
Comment from Bill Schott
A truly mesmerizing poem that lets the reader imagine all the lifetime that is awash somewhere in time and dimly remembered as if physically separated by the expanse of the universe. It's a powerful statement about loss, and what's important to remember.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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A truly mesmerizing poem that lets the reader imagine all the lifetime that is awash somewhere in time and dimly remembered as if physically separated by the expanse of the universe. It's a powerful statement about loss, and what's important to remember.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Very perceptive comment, thank you so much Bill. Pili
Comment from Jackarrie
This is a beautifully written free verse poem. The words you have chosen bring out the depth of sadness from whitin.
Ancient songs
can be heard
from far away
lost words
cling to blue stars
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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This is a beautifully written free verse poem. The words you have chosen bring out the depth of sadness from whitin.
Ancient songs
can be heard
from far away
lost words
cling to blue stars
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much Mary for a great review. Pili
Comment from Shirley B
This poem has excellent imagery. I like the free verse style. I really enjoy "Ancient songs can be heard from far away." Nice job. Thank you for sharing. Hope you have a great weekend, Shirley
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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This poem has excellent imagery. I like the free verse style. I really enjoy "Ancient songs can be heard from far away." Nice job. Thank you for sharing. Hope you have a great weekend, Shirley
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much Shirley , great review. Pili
Comment from Aussie
Amazing illustration to compliment your free verse musings. I liked your poem for its dream aspect and memories passing through your thoughts. Well done poet.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Amazing illustration to compliment your free verse musings. I liked your poem for its dream aspect and memories passing through your thoughts. Well done poet.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much Aussie for a great comment. Pili
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
Nice poem with an amazing accompanying imagery.nThese were my favorite lines:
Ancient songs
can be heard
from far away
lost words
cling to blue stars
Well done and thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Nice poem with an amazing accompanying imagery.nThese were my favorite lines:
Ancient songs
can be heard
from far away
lost words
cling to blue stars
Well done and thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much , great comment. Pili
Comment from chasennov
Free verse.. No punctuation From our soul. Reflections. This is a very good poem you have created here. I liked the power it ejects into a void that is hardly filled with remorse. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Free verse.. No punctuation From our soul. Reflections. This is a very good poem you have created here. I liked the power it ejects into a void that is hardly filled with remorse. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much , meaningful review. Pili
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You are most welcome, Pili.
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Smiles... Pili
Comment from Dom G Robles
Pili, your poem is reminiscent of bygone memories. And your expression stirs an imagination that is enriching and affecting the human soul. You portray the theme more with the choice of your picture and the body of the poem in white against the colored background blue-violet which makes your poem more meaningful and beautiful. You once again remember ancient songs from a distant land--which to cling to the blue stars. Thanks for sharing. Dom
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Pili, your poem is reminiscent of bygone memories. And your expression stirs an imagination that is enriching and affecting the human soul. You portray the theme more with the choice of your picture and the body of the poem in white against the colored background blue-violet which makes your poem more meaningful and beautiful. You once again remember ancient songs from a distant land--which to cling to the blue stars. Thanks for sharing. Dom
Comment Written 29-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Very meaningful words my friend. Thank you so much. Pili
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Welcome, Pili. Dom
Comment from Glasstruth
Stars are islands of the universe, and night's mystery is just that. Something that inspires writers. Like how you've structured your lines. Reads well. Thanks for sharing. Les
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Stars are islands of the universe, and night's mystery is just that. Something that inspires writers. Like how you've structured your lines. Reads well. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 28-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much Les, great comment. Pili
