From our soul.
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Reflections."Mostly romance.
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Comment from gazzagodbod
beautifully written my friend absolutely love the wonderful presentation thanks my friend loved it thank you xxgazzagodbodxx
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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beautifully written my friend absolutely love the wonderful presentation thanks my friend loved it thank you xxgazzagodbodxx
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thank you my poet friend... Pili
Comment from flamingstar
Ahhh, last stanza's my favorite. I was a bit confused in S2 and think it would read better as "...by yesterday's soft WHISPERED nights." Doesn't make sense otherwise. And in S3, I think you need an "a" in front of "thousand." It's unnecessarily jarring without it, IMO. Love "cling to blue stars." Great ending.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Ahhh, last stanza's my favorite. I was a bit confused in S2 and think it would read better as "...by yesterday's soft WHISPERED nights." Doesn't make sense otherwise. And in S3, I think you need an "a" in front of "thousand." It's unnecessarily jarring without it, IMO. Love "cling to blue stars." Great ending.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much for the suggestions , done, and a terrific comment. Pili
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is a very poetically beautiful, soothing poem, gentle and tender, like the sound of a lute. Very calming and pleasing to the ear.
An excellent job on this one.
Cheers,
Y.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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This is a very poetically beautiful, soothing poem, gentle and tender, like the sound of a lute. Very calming and pleasing to the ear.
An excellent job on this one.
Cheers,
Y.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Thank you so much, great comment. Pili
Comment from granny goes viral
Loved the last verse. Resonated with me. Actually I really connected with the entire song. It does sound like a heart song to me. Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Loved the last verse. Resonated with me. Actually I really connected with the entire song. It does sound like a heart song to me. Good job.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Glad you related my friend, thank you so much. Pili
Comment from rjuselius
you have an alchemy for words! i love the first stanza reminding us how small the delight of writing may have on us when it is as grand as the universe.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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you have an alchemy for words! i love the first stanza reminding us how small the delight of writing may have on us when it is as grand as the universe.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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What a terrific comment. Thank you so much. ..PILI
Comment from Blue.Sapphira
Wow! That is deep philosophy and beautiful poetry. To describe a feeling with that intensity is nothing short of an achievement. I wish I could write like you as well.
Please keep on writing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Wow! That is deep philosophy and beautiful poetry. To describe a feeling with that intensity is nothing short of an achievement. I wish I could write like you as well.
Please keep on writing.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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What a terrific comment It humbles me. Thank you so much. Pili
Comment from AuroraSky
Now I am glad I didn't miss out on reading this poem...so peaceful.
There's a nice quiet calmness flowing through the poem...your mind in contemplation--very nice.
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Now I am glad I didn't miss out on reading this poem...so peaceful.
There's a nice quiet calmness flowing through the poem...your mind in contemplation--very nice.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2005
Comment from amaranthblue
What an amazing feeling this held... The longing whispered in such a serene dreamy quality that haunted my mind with soothing yet sorrow filled patterns... The thoughts that unravel in those quiet times bringing the mysteries of life's experiences into a focus that transcends the every day... I loved the feeling in this and the easy flow that entranced the reader with each word perfectly placed...
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What an amazing feeling this held... The longing whispered in such a serene dreamy quality that haunted my mind with soothing yet sorrow filled patterns... The thoughts that unravel in those quiet times bringing the mysteries of life's experiences into a focus that transcends the every day... I loved the feeling in this and the easy flow that entranced the reader with each word perfectly placed...
Comment Written 01-Sep-2005
Comment from Lisloh
You have captured moments of reflection superbly.
Your style enhances the read and gives added meaning to the impact of emotion conveyed.
This is just simply an excellent write!
lost words
cling to the stars
They aren't lost as long as they are clinging.
I sense hope here.
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
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You have captured moments of reflection superbly.
Your style enhances the read and gives added meaning to the impact of emotion conveyed.
This is just simply an excellent write!
lost words
cling to the stars
They aren't lost as long as they are clinging.
I sense hope here.
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
Comment Written 30-Aug-2005
Comment from Black Wren
Once more, beautiful job!
I love the way you describe the feelings of reflection in this.
The first verse was awesome and the second wonderful.
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Once more, beautiful job!
I love the way you describe the feelings of reflection in this.
The first verse was awesome and the second wonderful.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2005
