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Comment from poetbear
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Great art here.used to feel like this but right now it just isn't there.
Not sure if I can get it back or if I want to because it doesn't make a difference.
It used to do that.
Your work does.
Nice work.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
    When you are ready it will come back because iyou feel like it, can't be forced...
    Thank you so much my poet friend. Smiles. Pili
Comment from Carole Rosa
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Pili, How very lovely. You have displayed the poem in a nice format and the photo art is eye catching. A voice in my mind also reminds me of memories. Very nicely done. Carole

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
    I am sure we all have them , thank you so very much Carole , meaningful review. Pili
Comment from Caroline Yego
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What a work of art, it feels like a nice perfume in a bottle. The background picture is a wonderful selling point as well.

Keep it up
Caroline

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
    Thank you so much Carolline... Pili
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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My soul feels like an island in vast universe
A voice quivers forlorn by yesterday's soft whispered nights. What lovely words. They send a feeling of calm and tranquility. Well done Pili. :<) Nancy

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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    Thank you so much Nancy , meaningful comment. Pili
Comment from ravenblack
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I really like the connection between " a voice quivers forlorn by yesterday's soft-whispered nights" and "ancient songs...clinging to blue stars". Sometimes feeling lost like an those voices can be heard as echoes of our own, the passage of time meaningless. Lost words cling to blue stars-excellent closing image. Just one suggestion- in vast universe- in a vast universe. Excellent poem.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
    Wonderful comment, thank you so much . Pili
Comment from Chrisfiore
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Hi Pili Pubul,

This is an excellent entry into the Free images poetry contest. I felt like I was floating through the cosmos on a breath of whimsy! My best to you with this contest entry. ;) Chrisfiore

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
    It is not for a contest , but thank you so very much for a good review. Pili
Comment from brentman99
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I think the picture does a great job of capturing my favourite lines - "an island in a vast universe." Talk about being a speck of cosmic dust! Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Brent.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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    Great comment , thank you so much Brent. Pili
Comment from Spiritual Echo
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Free verse rules these days and I think you've done a great job of snatching a thought and letting it ride on a breeze.

Take a look at these two lines.

by yesterday's
soft whispered nights

If you are talking about the past, the sum of all yesterdays, then it should be possessive until after the S--yesterdays'-- Re-locate the apostrophe.

If you are talking, as it indicate about yesterday, as in Friday, then the possessive is correct, but NIGHTS should be singular--yesterday's night. A single day can have just one night

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
    I deeply appreciate your correction, done. Thank you sooooo much . Pili
Comment from GBTEXT
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This poem opens on a note of loneliness. It however closes in hope abouty 'Ancient songs" that can be heard. After the quivering of "Voices", "Shadows" tend the mind, "silently floating". It calls for reflection and warm thoughts.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
    Interesting comment, thank you so much. Pili
Comment from TAB_that's me
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I can feel the dreaminess in this poem - the reflection on past memories - taking a look inside your soul. Great poem!
Teresa

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014
    Thank you so very much Tab.