Dead Man's Croon
Just a bit of whimsy :)36 total reviews
Comment from Dawny53
Excellent writing, to me it seemed to read like a story, and I find myself wanting more! Some really great suspense going there.. kept me on the edge of my seat! Nice art selection as well, I can see why you were inspired by it.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Excellent writing, to me it seemed to read like a story, and I find myself wanting more! Some really great suspense going there.. kept me on the edge of my seat! Nice art selection as well, I can see why you were inspired by it.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Dawny. What a lovely review! :) Sandra xsx
Comment from Aussie
Best lines 'Jaws clamped tightly but the man was keeping his finger on the trigger - firing too.' Great spooky poem that sent shivers down my spine. You really have turned the corner with your writing!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Best lines 'Jaws clamped tightly but the man was keeping his finger on the trigger - firing too.' Great spooky poem that sent shivers down my spine. You really have turned the corner with your writing!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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LOL, Kay, I am getting a few comments about the change of genre I have been writing lately. I'm so pleased you liked this one. Thanks a million for the 6 stars, my friend. I have been doing some research on the pearly button kings and queens. It all started with a lad from an orphanage over a hundred years ago. Its quite interesting. I am working on that one now. Thanks for the suggestion. :) Have a lovely day!! Sandra xsx
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The last Pearlies died some time back I think - at least they would have been accepted at the Pearly Gates! LOL :-) Lots of gypsies in UK (get photos from Bing, they are good and free.)
Comment from victor 66
A very imaginative poem flowing very well and easy to read. Using the art work of the wolf for inspiration, also a very good way to go. I think man has forgotten that he is a part of the 'food chain'. This is a good piece to remind him. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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A very imaginative poem flowing very well and easy to read. Using the art work of the wolf for inspiration, also a very good way to go. I think man has forgotten that he is a part of the 'food chain'. This is a good piece to remind him. Best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Victor. I never thought of it that way, we, being a part of the food chain, but you are so right. I'm glad you liked it. :) Sandra
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You are most welcome, Sandra. I truly enjoyed your whole approach to the story.
Comment from jmdg1954
I have nothing against wolves either, Sandra.
Well rhymed. Well thought out and shared with us readers. You were able to give it the chilling, eerie feel it needed to set the stage for the reader.
Nicely done. John
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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I have nothing against wolves either, Sandra.
Well rhymed. Well thought out and shared with us readers. You were able to give it the chilling, eerie feel it needed to set the stage for the reader.
Nicely done. John
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, John. You reviewed a poem I wrote a while ago, simply called 'The Wolf' that one was a nice smiley one. I couldn't turn this illustration into a nice one. LOL. I am pleased you enjoyed it. :) xsx Sandra
Comment from acerisestory
Wow! What a well written presentation you've given us, Sandra. I've never heard of a 'dead man's croon.' Great imagery. Your rhyming is very well done, and your poem moves with a great rhythm.
Thank you for sharing! I loved it. Alana
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Wow! What a well written presentation you've given us, Sandra. I've never heard of a 'dead man's croon.' Great imagery. Your rhyming is very well done, and your poem moves with a great rhythm.
Thank you for sharing! I loved it. Alana
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Alana. Dead Man's Croon' was a made up name, thought it sounded good! LOL. I'm pleased you enjoyed it, thank you. xsx sandra
Comment from Aplgwest
That is quite a picture. You did a good job of continuing the eerie mood those eyes convey. The poem flows smoothly and is an interesting account of a wolf hunt. --Elaine
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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That is quite a picture. You did a good job of continuing the eerie mood those eyes convey. The poem flows smoothly and is an interesting account of a wolf hunt. --Elaine
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Elaine. :) Sandra
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh my goodness Sandra! So unlike your normal poetry!
I must say the story is chilling and the presentation
is really striking especially the picture. See how talented you are. Well done! Hugs. Nancy
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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Oh my goodness Sandra! So unlike your normal poetry!
I must say the story is chilling and the presentation
is really striking especially the picture. See how talented you are. Well done! Hugs. Nancy
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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I know, I don't know what is going on in my head! Thank you, Nancy, for you lovely review. The picture really grabbed me! xsx sandra
Comment from Leineco
Oh, great! We manage to survive, by our chinny-chin-chin and the wolf has new carnage in mind! LOL
Nicely done. . .you made great use of the pic :-)
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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Oh, great! We manage to survive, by our chinny-chin-chin and the wolf has new carnage in mind! LOL
Nicely done. . .you made great use of the pic :-)
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Leineco, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. It would have been too easy to let them off. LOL. xsx sandra
Comment from Genya
An amazing picture and I can see why you were so inspired with it. Very well written and a strong story being told here. I love wolves and have seen so many films on them. One in particular always stands out in my mind. Dances with wolves I think it is called. An amazing film. It really upset me when the wolf died. The last verse really hooked me and I could see the wolf ready to go again with his new pack. Very good and full of imagery. Genya
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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An amazing picture and I can see why you were so inspired with it. Very well written and a strong story being told here. I love wolves and have seen so many films on them. One in particular always stands out in my mind. Dances with wolves I think it is called. An amazing film. It really upset me when the wolf died. The last verse really hooked me and I could see the wolf ready to go again with his new pack. Very good and full of imagery. Genya
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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I remember that film, it was amazing. I wanted a wolf after that, I wanted him to be my friend, (I cried when he died) Thank you for your wonderful review. I am so pleased you liked it. xsx sandra
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Sandra, I love this story about the wolf calling his pack to come for the hunt and the kill. He remains strong in the face of adversity of seeing death created by man. He calls for a second pack to create an attack upon these men. The leader may be the devil but the power of these men will not succumb to these wolves.
Very eerie and a very good read as your rhyme scheme flows so well.
Very well done my friend. Love you lots Sandra,,,,,,,Jim xxx
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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Sandra, I love this story about the wolf calling his pack to come for the hunt and the kill. He remains strong in the face of adversity of seeing death created by man. He calls for a second pack to create an attack upon these men. The leader may be the devil but the power of these men will not succumb to these wolves.
Very eerie and a very good read as your rhyme scheme flows so well.
Very well done my friend. Love you lots Sandra,,,,,,,Jim xxx
Comment Written 20-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014
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AWW, Jim, how I miss you on here. How are you my dear friend? Thank you so very much for this amazing review. You really are lovely. I hope you are feeling a little better, I know its hard for you. Thank you for the 6 stars. E-mail me, I want to know how you really are, love you too my friend. xsx sandra
