Comment from DanielEkine

Excellent

Very ethereal and windy. So eloquent and well-verse in rhyme and flow. A good diction of the wind. I really like this verse, "Are you friend or are you foe,
Will you howl or gently blow,
Will you let me see your face,
Run away without a trace!"

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014

Thank you for your wonderfully crafted and empathetic review and comments, Roy.

Comment from Pyrrho

Excellent

The vagaries of human spirit are captured well in this metaphoric almost rant-type poem, Maybe frustration-type poem is a better descriptive than rant.

In one metaphoric sense, you ask one of the unanswerable questions that Gertrude Stein answered, to wit: There aint no answer. There aint going to be any answer. There never has been an answer. That's the answer.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014

Merely reflective poem, nothing sinister! thank you for the great review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

All the beauties of Nature are created by God and I am sure there is a reason for everything. Well chosen rhymes, words and imagery to convey your lovely message. It has a nice smooth flow and was a most enjoyable read. Faye

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014

Thank you for the empathetic review and great comments, Roy.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Roy I love these verses........
This has powerful imagery....
Please be my friend, please show me grace ........
God bless

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014

Thank you Jenny, for this wonderful review and comments , blessings, Roy.

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! I loved the words of this poem. The author's words are descriptive, clear and creative. The reader pondered on this poem and spent time reflecting on the author's notes. The artwork is perfect and enhances the read.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014

Thank you so much for your kind and generous review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Lovely artwork. Lyrical with a good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice biblical reference quotes. Spiritually uplifting. Beautiful poem. Forgive me for running out of six stars. Have a wonderful week.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Alicia, for this perceptive, kind and lovely review, blessings, Roy

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

If the breeze is the Holy Spirit, I have a nomination for the wind that breaks the tree's bones. Road Rage! This is
just as artistic through a secular eye. Excellent.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014

Not this wind, thanks so much for the great review, blessings, Roy.

Comment from hari anand

Excellent

I sang this lovely song as I read, also like how you compare gentle breeze to God's breath, very novel thought, beautiful rhyme scheme Graces your song even more.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014

Thank you so much for the kind and empathetic review and comments, blessings, Roy.

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid rhyming couplets
effective use of repetition to intensify emotion
strong verb choices
good alliteration in break bones
effective use of imagery and soulful expression of emotion
Brooke

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014

Thank you for the wonderful review and great comments, you're a great reviewer, Brooke, blessings, Roy.

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Excellent personification of the powerful and elusive 'wind', Roy.

Loved the imagery of the lank clothes on lines, missing the excitement and 'dance' of the wind, in particular.

Excellent.

Best wishes, Ray.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Jul-2014

Thank you Ray, for the empathetic, review and comments, blessings, Roy.