Breezes, part1
Breath of God?88 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
What a lovely poem, deary! I am so blessed to read the author's notes. I did not think it meant the Holy Spirit, because I am caught up in the wind I suppose. I just reread and I can see now. Excuse me please. It has been a tiring day.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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What a lovely poem, deary! I am so blessed to read the author's notes. I did not think it meant the Holy Spirit, because I am caught up in the wind I suppose. I just reread and I can see now. Excuse me please. It has been a tiring day.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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I know the feeling reviewing can be very tiring, but still I got the niceties of your meaning, blessings, Roy.
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I have been raking needles under pine trees and going through my mum's stuff. She passed away last October and I miss her dearly. I came home exhausted and I am getting company for the next few days. Therefore, I must try to get some work done here too. bless you!
Comment from Raphael Montonaro
OK....here it is. I liked this because you used my favorite poetic devise,.....repetition! Easy read with a great message Good job!
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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OK....here it is. I liked this because you used my favorite poetic devise,.....repetition! Easy read with a great message Good job!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you Raphael , for your kind and emphatic review and comments, Roy.
Comment from lappmellott
I loved your poem and using the wind as a metaphor for the Holy Spirit was a great idea. I, too, believe firmly in the Holy Spirit. The photograph you chose to accompany this poem is, in itself, very spiritual. Great job.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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I loved your poem and using the wind as a metaphor for the Holy Spirit was a great idea. I, too, believe firmly in the Holy Spirit. The photograph you chose to accompany this poem is, in itself, very spiritual. Great job.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for the compliment and great review and comments, Blessings, Roy,
Comment from nancyjam
I love this poem about wind and its mystery
as a metaphor for the Holy Spirit.
The images are lovely as well as the rhyme and the flow.
A thoughtful Spiritual poem Nancy
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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I love this poem about wind and its mystery
as a metaphor for the Holy Spirit.
The images are lovely as well as the rhyme and the flow.
A thoughtful Spiritual poem Nancy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you Nancy for your great affirmation and comments blessings, Roy.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is excellent writing, royowen, great imagery about the Spirit that whispers and the devil that screams at us. I enjoyed reading this and it is worthy of a six....
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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this is excellent writing, royowen, great imagery about the Spirit that whispers and the devil that screams at us. I enjoyed reading this and it is worthy of a six....
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for the great, uplifting, review and comments, blessing , Roy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I remember reading this first part of this. It was wonderful and this is a perfect second part to it. You have done a great job writing this poem/song.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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I remember reading this first part of this. It was wonderful and this is a perfect second part to it. You have done a great job writing this poem/song.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you Baebara, this is only the first part, there is a second part coming this week, you might be thinking of " dust" thank you for the great review and comments, Roy.
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Stunning poem. The wind-swept dress is like a yellow ribbon to commemorate loss. This has a tone and feel with fantastic flow, rhyme and deep spirituality, too. This is a special work of art here. God bless.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Stunning poem. The wind-swept dress is like a yellow ribbon to commemorate loss. This has a tone and feel with fantastic flow, rhyme and deep spirituality, too. This is a special work of art here. God bless.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank up so much for the wonderful review and comments, I appreciate them so much blessings, Roy.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Wow Roy! This is such a great song and well written. You always write great spiritual poetry that I love. Can't wait for part II.
Teresa
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Wow Roy! This is such a great song and well written. You always write great spiritual poetry that I love. Can't wait for part II.
Teresa
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you Teresa, you are always a breath of fresh air to me and a spirit booster, and a great review too, blessings, Roy.
Comment from marijmd
What a beautiful and inspiring picture you chose!
Your poem makes me want to go on a mountaintop and feel the awe of nature whip around me. Great quality to the flow - a lovely read.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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What a beautiful and inspiring picture you chose!
Your poem makes me want to go on a mountaintop and feel the awe of nature whip around me. Great quality to the flow - a lovely read.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for your kind and generous remarks and review, blessings, Roy!
Comment from GentleWind
Beautiful expression of the Holy Spirit. I truly enjoyed the lyrical flow and the visuals were so clear and clean. If I was an artist,(which I'm not)I could paint clearly what you have declared here. Great job
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Beautiful expression of the Holy Spirit. I truly enjoyed the lyrical flow and the visuals were so clear and clean. If I was an artist,(which I'm not)I could paint clearly what you have declared here. Great job
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Thank you for your great review,and comments, and appropriate name, blessings, Roy
