Breezes, part1
Breath of God?88 total reviews
Comment from Andrewajgblue
I really enjoyed this song, I loved the rhyme very much, it was so easy to read and follow, your wording is exceptional all the way through, it felt very spiritual, which I know is your intention, well done
Andrew
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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I really enjoyed this song, I loved the rhyme very much, it was so easy to read and follow, your wording is exceptional all the way through, it felt very spiritual, which I know is your intention, well done
Andrew
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you Andrew for the kind and generous review, and comments, glad you enjoyed it! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from MAB
VERY DEEP I am inspired highly by the Holy Spirit, and always ruminate about emotion of tenderness. Thank you for sharing
SAM
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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VERY DEEP I am inspired highly by the Holy Spirit, and always ruminate about emotion of tenderness. Thank you for sharing
SAM
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, for this great review, and comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine piece of poetic art! i love the concept of wind being a metaphor for holy spirit! the rhyme and rhythm work well together.
thank you for sharing such a delicate poem!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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this is a fine piece of poetic art! i love the concept of wind being a metaphor for holy spirit! the rhyme and rhythm work well together.
thank you for sharing such a delicate poem!
rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much Rebekka, for the wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is a beautiful song, Roy, and reminds me of a poem I used to recite as a child about the wind. I enjoyed it, particularly your rhyming lines which I like very much, (good rhyming poetry is a treat around here.) Giddy
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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This is a beautiful song, Roy, and reminds me of a poem I used to recite as a child about the wind. I enjoyed it, particularly your rhyming lines which I like very much, (good rhyming poetry is a treat around here.) Giddy
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank Giddy, for this really great review and comments. Roy.
Comment from mfowler
Roy, this is gorgeous. I love the Pentecost imagery for Spirit, and I think this captures it so subtly, so powerfully in a unique work. The seeking questions, among the beautiful imagery of 'wind' related situations (eg Oh breath of wind where do you go,
When flags on poles hang limp and low,
When clothes on lines fall lank and wet,) work very effectively in expressing the anguish and hope of the seeker in times of need.
I find this work more spiritual and more real in terms of God and life, because it lacks the didactic stress of many religious works. By this, I mean, you let the ryhthm, imagery, and questions speak of God and Spirit, not weighing down the poetry with the need to preach. Same message; but delivered with beauty.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Roy, this is gorgeous. I love the Pentecost imagery for Spirit, and I think this captures it so subtly, so powerfully in a unique work. The seeking questions, among the beautiful imagery of 'wind' related situations (eg Oh breath of wind where do you go,
When flags on poles hang limp and low,
When clothes on lines fall lank and wet,) work very effectively in expressing the anguish and hope of the seeker in times of need.
I find this work more spiritual and more real in terms of God and life, because it lacks the didactic stress of many religious works. By this, I mean, you let the ryhthm, imagery, and questions speak of God and Spirit, not weighing down the poetry with the need to preach. Same message; but delivered with beauty.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you Mark, you and another were the ones to pick up the metaphorical apparent absence of God in that verse, you're definitely perceptive, I think the poem defines our relationship to God, secular reviews were interesting, all liked it, you can present God in a non threatening way, outstanding review, my friend, blessings, Roy
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I read your reviews, Roy. You should be very happy with the spread of great reviews.
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Yeh they were good ones alright! Thanks Mark.
Comment from Charlene0513
To royowen,
A stunning example of how the Holy Spirit will enter our all-consuming, grief-stricken lives and bring us to our knees to bring Him the praise and glory daily.
Charlene
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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To royowen,
A stunning example of how the Holy Spirit will enter our all-consuming, grief-stricken lives and bring us to our knees to bring Him the praise and glory daily.
Charlene
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you Charlene for such a kind and generous, review and comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from GWinterwin
Pretty poem with a pretty picture. Good word flow and rhyming make this easy to read and understand. This is a neat song, relating the wind to the holy spirit.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Pretty poem with a pretty picture. Good word flow and rhyming make this easy to read and understand. This is a neat song, relating the wind to the holy spirit.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for this kind and generous comments and review, blessings,Roy,
Comment from Sankey
Well done Bro, once again. A good read can almost anticipate the rhyme as we go along. I also loved the veryt nice picture you added. A good poem/song all round Bro.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Well done Bro, once again. A good read can almost anticipate the rhyme as we go along. I also loved the veryt nice picture you added. A good poem/song all round Bro.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you Geoff, for your support and generous comments and review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Selina Stambi
I love the underlying reference to the Holy Spirit.
The words appealed to me - particularly this stanza:
Oh breath of wind where do you go,
When flags on poles hang limp and low,
When clothes on lines fall lank and wet,
They seem so sad, without you, fret
A lovely song, Roy. Reads like a lovely old fashioned Victorian lyric.
I think you might need a comma or an exclamation mark after each 'Oh'.
Sonali
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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I love the underlying reference to the Holy Spirit.
The words appealed to me - particularly this stanza:
Oh breath of wind where do you go,
When flags on poles hang limp and low,
When clothes on lines fall lank and wet,
They seem so sad, without you, fret
A lovely song, Roy. Reads like a lovely old fashioned Victorian lyric.
I think you might need a comma or an exclamation mark after each 'Oh'.
Sonali
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much Sonali, for your support and wonderful review and comments, blessings, Review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Angel Debbie
Very lovely song. Maybe we will hear it on the radio some day. It's that good my friend. Now you need to find a music publisher for it. That way all Christians can hear it's message!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Very lovely song. Maybe we will hear it on the radio some day. It's that good my friend. Now you need to find a music publisher for it. That way all Christians can hear it's message!
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Debbie for this lovely review and stars, blessings, Roy.
