Breezes, part1
Breath of God?88 total reviews
Comment from Alan K Pease
Your poem reminds me of Shelly's -
"Oh wild west wind,
thou breath of August's being."
Yours is:
"Oh breath of wind against my face,
Surround me with your warm embrace,"
All together it is very lovely prose.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Your poem reminds me of Shelly's -
"Oh wild west wind,
thou breath of August's being."
Yours is:
"Oh breath of wind against my face,
Surround me with your warm embrace,"
All together it is very lovely prose.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you Alan, for these wonderful words and great review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from heyjude
Roy, I'd like to hear it. Yes, where would we all be
without grace. I like the thought of the embrace of
God and His Holy Spirit. Good job on the rhyming.
Good flow to it.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Roy, I'd like to hear it. Yes, where would we all be
without grace. I like the thought of the embrace of
God and His Holy Spirit. Good job on the rhyming.
Good flow to it.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you for these wonderful words and comments. Are you Liverpudlian? With a non de plume, I live in Australia, but was born there, blessings, Roy.
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Roy, I had to plead ignorance, but I don't know what a Liverpudlian is? I like in the States; Oklahoma to be exact. Judy
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Hey Jude, Is an Liverpool, England expression, it means funny little fool! as per the Beatles song Hey Jude! Jude is the Patron saint of fools! No offense intended! blessings, Judy, Roy.
Comment from Auroraboreal800
This is a lovely poem, with an excellent choice of words. Nicely written, with good rhyming, flow and meter. Very sweet.
Nicely done job Roy!
:)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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This is a lovely poem, with an excellent choice of words. Nicely written, with good rhyming, flow and meter. Very sweet.
Nicely done job Roy!
:)
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you for these kind words and generous review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Kingsland
I really didn't connect with the spiritual in this verse, but you can read into a poem many different variables. This was a well written poetic voice. For this poem is about connect with nature, at least that I what I discerned it to be. In any event, I found this verse to be well written and very entertaining... John
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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I really didn't connect with the spiritual in this verse, but you can read into a poem many different variables. This was a well written poetic voice. For this poem is about connect with nature, at least that I what I discerned it to be. In any event, I found this verse to be well written and very entertaining... John
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you John, for the great words and review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from skye
I am grateful for the author's notes, as I am a literal reader and enjoy the wind for being the wind, but.... now I LOVE it even more. Your words are well written, your rhymes and lines flow smoothly, and the chosen artwork is terrific. Excellent.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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I am grateful for the author's notes, as I am a literal reader and enjoy the wind for being the wind, but.... now I LOVE it even more. Your words are well written, your rhymes and lines flow smoothly, and the chosen artwork is terrific. Excellent.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you Skye, for the wonderful words and review, blessings, Roy
Comment from nomi338
Excellent observation. Then you should or must know that the Holy spirit is God's active force, the force or power that He uses to get things done. It is also interesting to note that this power can be creative or destructive. It is dependent upon the will of the one using or directing it, our heavenly father.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Excellent observation. Then you should or must know that the Holy spirit is God's active force, the force or power that He uses to get things done. It is also interesting to note that this power can be creative or destructive. It is dependent upon the will of the one using or directing it, our heavenly father.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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You are absolutely right! He is the Master of the storm and the holder of all life, if you look in my portfolio you will see evidence of my belief! Than you for the affirming and wonderful comments, and review! Blessings, Roy.
Comment from Bill Schott
I sensed the connection to the grace of God or the Holy Spirit right away. This is a catchy configuration of phrases that make great song lyrics. I will look forward to the second half.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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I sensed the connection to the grace of God or the Holy Spirit right away. This is a catchy configuration of phrases that make great song lyrics. I will look forward to the second half.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you Bill for this outstanding review and great stars, I appreciate so much! Blessings, Roy,
Comment from risktaker
I love the imagery, choice of words, structure, and tone. I love the Holy Spirit. I relate to "please show me grace," "Please be my friend," "surround me with your warm embrace," Amen Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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I love the imagery, choice of words, structure, and tone. I love the Holy Spirit. I relate to "please show me grace," "Please be my friend," "surround me with your warm embrace," Amen Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review and stars! Blessings, Roy.
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Comment from mbagby23
God lives every where. In the wind, rain, sky, and even in the grass. Lives inside of some of us as well. Waking us up everyday to see new grace.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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God lives every where. In the wind, rain, sky, and even in the grass. Lives inside of some of us as well. Waking us up everyday to see new grace.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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All who have believed by faith, yes it's true, God is omniscient, I Him we live and move and have our being! Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, blessings, Roy.
Comment from LoannaLois
I wish I had a ten. ..and wish it could be given to the first part of your song. It flows like the story it tells...and the story is that of "the rush of a mighty wind ". I really love this and the truth of it.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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I wish I had a ten. ..and wish it could be given to the first part of your song. It flows like the story it tells...and the story is that of "the rush of a mighty wind ". I really love this and the truth of it.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review and comments Loanna, glad you enjoyed it, blessings, Roy
