An Epigram for Troubled Times
an epigram156 total reviews
Comment from Muffins
It's a shame our leaders don't take that approach. And because of orders, our soldiers on the ground cannot either. The symbolic picture of Sawyer and your first line: "He who hugs is not inclined
to arm himself for war," is remarkable in its insight of what human nature can be when all of the ugliness is taken out of the picture.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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It's a shame our leaders don't take that approach. And because of orders, our soldiers on the ground cannot either. The symbolic picture of Sawyer and your first line: "He who hugs is not inclined
to arm himself for war," is remarkable in its insight of what human nature can be when all of the ugliness is taken out of the picture.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Muffins, thank you so very much :-) Sadly, the leaders are the ones to send other people's children into harm's way whilst they live safely thousands of miles from the conflicts. Brooke
Comment from GeraldS
This has a lot of 'punch' for four lines, two sentences. It is truly a thought provoking piece. The message is clear and nicely presented. The poem functions on two levels. It is 'light' and uplifting on its surface, but yet holds a depth of meaning. Well-written and enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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This has a lot of 'punch' for four lines, two sentences. It is truly a thought provoking piece. The message is clear and nicely presented. The poem functions on two levels. It is 'light' and uplifting on its surface, but yet holds a depth of meaning. Well-written and enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Gerald, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from BLACKDYKE
What a lovely message for the world
Brooke, if only they would listen.
I don't see much witt but I do see a
great observation for all to learn
by. Eric
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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What a lovely message for the world
Brooke, if only they would listen.
I don't see much witt but I do see a
great observation for all to learn
by. Eric
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Eric, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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my pleasure
Comment from Goodauthor
This is a excellent poem and so true. If you put two Congressmen--who would declare a war into a room--each with a single-shot dueling pistol, and give them fifteen minutes to negotiate or one of them would surly die. You don't know how fast each coward would negotiate to save his life
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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This is a excellent poem and so true. If you put two Congressmen--who would declare a war into a room--each with a single-shot dueling pistol, and give them fifteen minutes to negotiate or one of them would surly die. You don't know how fast each coward would negotiate to save his life
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Goodauthor, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
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You're welcome.
Comment from Eric1
Of course it should Brooke, our arms are for cuddling, for holding, for holding out for everlasting peace, or in the other way, arms should be laid down.
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Of course it should Brooke, our arms are for cuddling, for holding, for holding out for everlasting peace, or in the other way, arms should be laid down.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
Comment from Gladness
Great epigram, it made me smile :) Sawyer and his puppy show us the better use of our arms in this sweet picture. If only we could convince the world of this.
Anita
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Great epigram, it made me smile :) Sawyer and his puppy show us the better use of our arms in this sweet picture. If only we could convince the world of this.
Anita
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Anita, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from costellsgirl33
I think that is the most adorable picture of Sawyer that I have ever seen!
He's is too precious!
Your poem is very well written
And it makes a very good point
Great job as always ;)
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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I think that is the most adorable picture of Sawyer that I have ever seen!
He's is too precious!
Your poem is very well written
And it makes a very good point
Great job as always ;)
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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costellsgirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are welcome Brooke :)
Arnetta
Comment from Ola Awakan
Succinct but great in meaning. When arms are opened to a hug, it shows friendship and love. That is what we need on earth and not war. We need peace. Good
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Succinct but great in meaning. When arms are opened to a hug, it shows friendship and love. That is what we need on earth and not war. We need peace. Good
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Ola, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from sibhus
Yes, so true espicially in this modern world that is so filled with hate. A short simple piece that really says so much, it would be wonderful if the world could only try this. This is a great picture to go along with your poem, Brooke.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Yes, so true espicially in this modern world that is so filled with hate. A short simple piece that really says so much, it would be wonderful if the world could only try this. This is a great picture to go along with your poem, Brooke.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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sibhus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from angelface2
What a nice thought. I love the picture of Sawyer, hugging his puppy dog. I dread thinking about those who must, for one reason or another, arm for war! I must admit I am a huggy-type person. LOL. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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What a nice thought. I love the picture of Sawyer, hugging his puppy dog. I dread thinking about those who must, for one reason or another, arm for war! I must admit I am a huggy-type person. LOL. Miss Sally
Comment Written 21-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2014
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Sally, thank you so much :-) Brooke
