The House with the Cardboard Walls
I once lived in a duplex with walls that were paper thin.2 total reviews
Comment from Nataviah
if you could change the font color on this it would be great. right now i can't read it. if you fix this and let me know i would be glad to read it. the rateing is only because i could not read it.
God bless
nataviah
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if you could change the font color on this it would be great. right now i can't read it. if you fix this and let me know i would be glad to read it. the rateing is only because i could not read it.
God bless
nataviah
Comment Written 18-Jul-2014
Comment from adewpearl
This poem cannot be read with white font on light background unless the reader uses the highlight function, and not everyone even knows how to do that
You have also misunderstood the rules of the contest
The 5/7/5 form requires a poem of only three lines with a syllable count of five syllables/seven syllables/five syllables :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2014
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This poem cannot be read with white font on light background unless the reader uses the highlight function, and not everyone even knows how to do that
You have also misunderstood the rules of the contest
The 5/7/5 form requires a poem of only three lines with a syllable count of five syllables/seven syllables/five syllables :-) Brooke
Comment Written 18-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2014
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thanks sorry about the bad colors.
