From our soul.
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "Lonely dreams."Mostly romance.
18 total reviews
Comment from Black Wren
Always wonderful descriptions that invoke marvelous images in the mind.
I especially love that description of dancing on soft grass barefoot.
Beautiful!
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Always wonderful descriptions that invoke marvelous images in the mind.
I especially love that description of dancing on soft grass barefoot.
Beautiful!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2005
Comment from Tempesta
It's a wonderful thing when we are able to find peace within the depth of our souls. Beautiful imagery and lovely words without one wasted. Very impressive.
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It's a wonderful thing when we are able to find peace within the depth of our souls. Beautiful imagery and lovely words without one wasted. Very impressive.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
Comment from Lisloh
Ahhh Pili, I hear a Soul crying for love in this one.
a love song
flows over
lonely dreams
I pray this is past and you are just writing because of experience and memory. I can relate to this though.
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
No nits. Awesome write.
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Ahhh Pili, I hear a Soul crying for love in this one.
a love song
flows over
lonely dreams
I pray this is past and you are just writing because of experience and memory. I can relate to this though.
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
No nits. Awesome write.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
Comment from bayley
You write the most sensuous poetry. The descriptions of your body and soul being touched and tantalised by the elements of Nature is provocative, Your dream world is full of warm, gentle sensations and you convey the whole physical and spiritual experience with phrases and words that touch and make us feel. Beautiful ~Sean
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You write the most sensuous poetry. The descriptions of your body and soul being touched and tantalised by the elements of Nature is provocative, Your dream world is full of warm, gentle sensations and you convey the whole physical and spiritual experience with phrases and words that touch and make us feel. Beautiful ~Sean
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
Comment from Olufade Sola
Natural. Free-flowing. Softly rhythmic. These are the words I'll use to describe this poem. It has nothing to do with the painting. The poet is surely a verse-writer, almost in the Psalmist style. Her words are simple though not thoroughly worked upon. Instant imagery is invoked in the reader, with a gentle breeze blowing over the reader's mind. But much of her poems do not stand up to her gift. They do not match the author. Yet they vivdly, and surprisingly, convey a scene of tranquilness and beauty.
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Natural. Free-flowing. Softly rhythmic. These are the words I'll use to describe this poem. It has nothing to do with the painting. The poet is surely a verse-writer, almost in the Psalmist style. Her words are simple though not thoroughly worked upon. Instant imagery is invoked in the reader, with a gentle breeze blowing over the reader's mind. But much of her poems do not stand up to her gift. They do not match the author. Yet they vivdly, and surprisingly, convey a scene of tranquilness and beauty.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
Comment from sengwriter
Your fantasy have reached you to a deep realization.
Dancing with the beat of your heart barefoot over soft grass, gentle breezes caressing your body, whispers of nature creating magical music, a love song flows over lonely dreams.
When you could percept so well as you took shelter deep within your soul, hope you feel some solemn peace and tranquility amidst some pain gathered by the provocation of some hypnotic allurements. But I find by the supreme power of your consolidated mind you've painted your feelings here. I became engrossed and enchanted by the wonder of your words of expression.
A very nice poem and lines from the beginning to end just rolled us on to a beautiful end. I liked it as usual and I hope some ecstacy of life now from you too as a superb transition of your solaced mind.
~ Gautam
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Your fantasy have reached you to a deep realization.
Dancing with the beat of your heart barefoot over soft grass, gentle breezes caressing your body, whispers of nature creating magical music, a love song flows over lonely dreams.
When you could percept so well as you took shelter deep within your soul, hope you feel some solemn peace and tranquility amidst some pain gathered by the provocation of some hypnotic allurements. But I find by the supreme power of your consolidated mind you've painted your feelings here. I became engrossed and enchanted by the wonder of your words of expression.
A very nice poem and lines from the beginning to end just rolled us on to a beautiful end. I liked it as usual and I hope some ecstacy of life now from you too as a superb transition of your solaced mind.
~ Gautam
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Hypnoptized
by visions
of allurement,
that softly
push my mind
far, far away
inside the depth
of the soul,
where I find
peace.
You sure are dreamy lately!
Are you writing a fantasy book?
Just curious.
Your poetry takes me to a la la sense.
Who needs Prozac (an anti-depressant drug)?
I just have to read your poems!
Nice.
Jewell
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Hypnoptized
by visions
of allurement,
that softly
push my mind
far, far away
inside the depth
of the soul,
where I find
peace.
You sure are dreamy lately!
Are you writing a fantasy book?
Just curious.
Your poetry takes me to a la la sense.
Who needs Prozac (an anti-depressant drug)?
I just have to read your poems!
Nice.
Jewell
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
Comment from Lainee
Pili as usual this is a lovely read. The sensual and gentle qualities of your thoughts are displayed with wonderful imagery my friend.
whispers of nature
creates ...create
magical music,
love song ...a love song
flows over
lonely dreams.
PM me if you adjust.
Goodluck always,
Lainee :O)
Much better :O)
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Pili as usual this is a lovely read. The sensual and gentle qualities of your thoughts are displayed with wonderful imagery my friend.
whispers of nature
creates ...create
magical music,
love song ...a love song
flows over
lonely dreams.
PM me if you adjust.
Goodluck always,
Lainee :O)
Much better :O)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
Comment from Winbow
Beautiful, exquisite imagery. Very well written again. You know Pili I think that one never ever dreams alone. Whenever you dream it is a collection of everyone's soul messages for you. These messages come via provindence.
At the right time and at the right place and when we are good and ready these dreams become reality.
Take Care Des
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Beautiful, exquisite imagery. Very well written again. You know Pili I think that one never ever dreams alone. Whenever you dream it is a collection of everyone's soul messages for you. These messages come via provindence.
At the right time and at the right place and when we are good and ready these dreams become reality.
Take Care Des
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
Comment from AuroraSky
And dreams stay lonely until the dreams are shared...then they become magical in a way that can only be called 'life'.
Cool poem Pili...sad imagery of a gentle spirit's calling.
'I kneel
by the lake's edge
crystalline water
washes
my face,
my hands
play, infinite
circles expand
further and further
under a watchful
orange sky...'
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And dreams stay lonely until the dreams are shared...then they become magical in a way that can only be called 'life'.
Cool poem Pili...sad imagery of a gentle spirit's calling.
'I kneel
by the lake's edge
crystalline water
washes
my face,
my hands
play, infinite
circles expand
further and further
under a watchful
orange sky...'
Comment Written 29-Aug-2005
