Mutual Madness
Naani42 total reviews
Comment from playinaround
Very tragic and disturbing. This write got a rise out of me from my soul. Well written. If this doesn't move the reader, I don't know what would. Thank you for sharing..
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Very tragic and disturbing. This write got a rise out of me from my soul. Well written. If this doesn't move the reader, I don't know what would. Thank you for sharing..
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much for the kind words.
Steve
Comment from acerisestory
Your Naani packs a big punch, Steve! It breaks my heart that children die while leaders cannot compromise. You've done a great job with your message of sadness. Thank you very much, and congratulations on our win. Well deserved. Alana
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Your Naani packs a big punch, Steve! It breaks my heart that children die while leaders cannot compromise. You've done a great job with your message of sadness. Thank you very much, and congratulations on our win. Well deserved. Alana
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Alana, thanks so much for the positive review - how many more innocent deaths???
Steve
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Yes, how many? Alana
Comment from Nosha17
Congratulations on your win, very poignant words to convey your message. How can anyone from the powers that be ever justify such actions, targeting children civilians, I hope they forever have it on their consciences. Horrific image, and still it goes on. Well written in a few words. Faye
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Congratulations on your win, very poignant words to convey your message. How can anyone from the powers that be ever justify such actions, targeting children civilians, I hope they forever have it on their consciences. Horrific image, and still it goes on. Well written in a few words. Faye
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Faye, thanks for the thoughtful review.
Steve
Comment from chasennov
"Mutual Madness" It is a tragic situation in Palestine where the hotheads keep on firing rockets into Israel, hoping that the Israelis will try and avoid firing on women and children in retaliation. If one plays chess, this will be known as a stalemate.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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"Mutual Madness" It is a tragic situation in Palestine where the hotheads keep on firing rockets into Israel, hoping that the Israelis will try and avoid firing on women and children in retaliation. If one plays chess, this will be known as a stalemate.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Thank you.
Not much of a stalemate when the death toll is 200 - 1...
Steve
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Welcome, Steve. There is however, a true perspective here.
Comment from DionysusDeVille
This is the true state of the world. Everyone so mistrusting and yet they keep killing each other. No one will ever stop the violence
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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This is the true state of the world. Everyone so mistrusting and yet they keep killing each other. No one will ever stop the violence
Comment Written 17-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Thank you.
I am afraid you are right.
Steve
Comment from seaglass
This is a timely subject for this naani contest. isn't it sad how innocent children die because adults can't work out problems? Pray for peace.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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This is a timely subject for this naani contest. isn't it sad how innocent children die because adults can't work out problems? Pray for peace.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from Bina1
Wishing you a six for this fine poem! Madness indeed, and it continues daily in multiple areas. A fine entry for the contest, good luck! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Wishing you a six for this fine poem! Madness indeed, and it continues daily in multiple areas. A fine entry for the contest, good luck! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from c_lucas
When the demons run the streets, The innocents suffers. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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When the demons run the streets, The innocents suffers. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Steve
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You're welcome, Steve
Comment from Leineco
Powerful statement of war's idiocy! And so damned accurate!
I could nit pick about the proper syllable count of fire - but I'm more than willing to accept the one count (cuz I think that's how most people say it most of the time)
Really nice naani
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Powerful statement of war's idiocy! And so damned accurate!
I could nit pick about the proper syllable count of fire - but I'm more than willing to accept the one count (cuz I think that's how most people say it most of the time)
Really nice naani
Comment Written 16-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
This is an excellent work. The photograph paired with your dynamic words pack a wallop.
You're right, it's the innocents the dies, and still the killing continues. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Hi,
This is an excellent work. The photograph paired with your dynamic words pack a wallop.
You're right, it's the innocents the dies, and still the killing continues. Good luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 16-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Thanks, jax
.... and now another 300 innocent people have been killed - senseless stuff.
Steve
