Shadows of Heaven
Even in darkness, man is still a reflection of the Divine.2 total reviews
Comment from gazzagodbod
wow miss wolf this is the first i have read of your work very impressive my friend love the dark presentation and your words just wonderful xxgazzagodbodxx
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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wow miss wolf this is the first i have read of your work very impressive my friend love the dark presentation and your words just wonderful xxgazzagodbodxx
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much!:)
Comment from Pyrrho
wings/strings rhyme is forced
insanity rolls the dice ... good metaphor for random happenings of life.
prayer/stair also forced
With a little work you could eliminate your tendency to use forced rhymes instead of giving up the actual meaning you seek so cavalierly.
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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wings/strings rhyme is forced
insanity rolls the dice ... good metaphor for random happenings of life.
prayer/stair also forced
With a little work you could eliminate your tendency to use forced rhymes instead of giving up the actual meaning you seek so cavalierly.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 19-Jul-2014
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Thanks!
