A Tale of Corruption
story about what is happening in the Philippines3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
There are a couple of detractors for your poem about the imeldific queen. The first, and most importantly, it's entered in a 5-7-5 contest. That means it can't be any longer than seventeen syllables and three lines.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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There are a couple of detractors for your poem about the imeldific queen. The first, and most importantly, it's entered in a 5-7-5 contest. That means it can't be any longer than seventeen syllables and three lines.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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My mistake. I thought I have entered a free verse competition. Thank you for your comment and for your rating.
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My mistake. I thought I have entered a free verse competition. Thank you for your comment and for your rating.
Comment from Ben Colder
I never hardly give 4 stars but I did to get you attention. This is not a 5-7-5 poem and it may be disqualified. What you wrote is good but not a 5-7-5. My blessings to you.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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I never hardly give 4 stars but I did to get you attention. This is not a 5-7-5 poem and it may be disqualified. What you wrote is good but not a 5-7-5. My blessings to you.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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My mistake. Thank you for still giving me a good rating. I thought I have entered a free verse competition. Thank you for your comment.
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My mistake. Thank you for still giving me a good rating. I thought I have entered a free verse competition. Thank you for your comment.
Comment from ujbhurtah
Corruption... Where all the rich become richer and the poor becomes poorer each and every day... Corruption, the soft killer of all a population desperately fighting to progress in life...
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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Corruption... Where all the rich become richer and the poor becomes poorer each and every day... Corruption, the soft killer of all a population desperately fighting to progress in life...
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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Yup. Corruption is the greatest killer among all the possible killers in the universe. Very rampant. Thanks for your rating and comment
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Yup. Corruption is the greatest killer among all the possible killers in the universe. Very rampant. Thanks for your rating and comment
