Night Sounds
A Cacophony Poem24 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
good abcb rhyming with internal rhymes in the a and c lines
nice alliteration in phrases like soulful sighing and in Satan's snarling screeching
excellent use of feminine rhyme
I love brawling squalls :-)
fantastic verb choices that add to the intensity and drama of your poem
I have chills, my friend - now I'm off to find a cute picture of a kitten to soothe myself :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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good abcb rhyming with internal rhymes in the a and c lines
nice alliteration in phrases like soulful sighing and in Satan's snarling screeching
excellent use of feminine rhyme
I love brawling squalls :-)
fantastic verb choices that add to the intensity and drama of your poem
I have chills, my friend - now I'm off to find a cute picture of a kitten to soothe myself :-) Brooke
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Thanks, Brooke.
Don't be too soothed by those feline witches' companions...
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allow me the cuteness of kittens, my friend - it is not even nice to try to give me the creeps about everything!! LOL
Comment from ujbhurtah
This is a very captivating and beautiful poem describing the arrival of death in front of our door in the middle of the night.
That poem would be excellent in any book chapter where there is a slow and progressive death scene.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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This is a very captivating and beautiful poem describing the arrival of death in front of our door in the middle of the night.
That poem would be excellent in any book chapter where there is a slow and progressive death scene.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Thanks for the kind words and the six stars.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem fits the contest well. It uses sound throughout and the black background and the artwork denote the evil of the devil. A sound that God surely would cry when hearing.
The abab rhyme scheme and meter make the poem and emotion flow freely.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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This poem fits the contest well. It uses sound throughout and the black background and the artwork denote the evil of the devil. A sound that God surely would cry when hearing.
The abab rhyme scheme and meter make the poem and emotion flow freely.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
dragonpoet
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Thank you!
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You're welcome.
dragonpoet
Comment from Nosha17
In the dark world of the supernatural one would expect to hear such sounds and sense such imagery. Excellent rhymes and use of words to convey your thoughts. Good complimentary illustration and enjoyable read, good luck in the contest. Faye
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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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In the dark world of the supernatural one would expect to hear such sounds and sense such imagery. Excellent rhymes and use of words to convey your thoughts. Good complimentary illustration and enjoyable read, good luck in the contest. Faye
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Thanks, Faye!
