Is Faith the Wave?
rhyming quatrains120 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
I like your perspective on Faith. The wonderment and exaggeration is wonderful. Good lyrical flow of words. Great rhyming. Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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I like your perspective on Faith. The wonderment and exaggeration is wonderful. Good lyrical flow of words. Great rhyming. Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2014
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thank you, sunnilicious, for your thoughtful review and kind contest wishes :-) Brooke
Comment from mermaids
I am amazed by your smooth rhyming and thought-provoking words. Love the image of the wave as faith,unique and creative,adding a spiritual feel to your words.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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I am amazed by your smooth rhyming and thought-provoking words. Love the image of the wave as faith,unique and creative,adding a spiritual feel to your words.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Elaine, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
'Is faith that wave?' is a wonderful question. I loved this quatrain/faith poetry. Loved the way you described faith by comparing it to a wave.
Good Luck in the contest~!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Hello there~!
'Is faith that wave?' is a wonderful question. I loved this quatrain/faith poetry. Loved the way you described faith by comparing it to a wave.
Good Luck in the contest~!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Kausar, thank you so much. JazakAllahKhair - I like that :-) Brooke
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It means "May Allāh reward you [with] goodness." Allāh is the Arabic word for God.
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What a thoughtful blessing. Has more of a poetic ring to it than God bless you :-)
Comment from rod007
Faith is the greatest treasure and you captured it well in this poem. You're right, faith does not have to plot a course as it is something that searches for freedom, peace and God in its wondrous journey within our cosmos and our soul. Well done, Brooke.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Faith is the greatest treasure and you captured it well in this poem. You're right, faith does not have to plot a course as it is something that searches for freedom, peace and God in its wondrous journey within our cosmos and our soul. Well done, Brooke.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Rod, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Hareem.S
This is a very good and thoughtful poem you have penned down here. I like the short and meaningful stanzas about faith and musings over it.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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This is a very good and thoughtful poem you have penned down here. I like the short and meaningful stanzas about faith and musings over it.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Hareem, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from fayesh
Brooke, I enjoyed your quatrain on the theme of "faith." Your format of questioning the metaphorical possibilities of faith is clever and well done. A wonderful piece of rhymed verse.
Faye :)
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Brooke, I enjoyed your quatrain on the theme of "faith." Your format of questioning the metaphorical possibilities of faith is clever and well done. A wonderful piece of rhymed verse.
Faye :)
Comment Written 14-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Faye, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from evilynne
We all question the nature of faith. As always, your work is well written and follows the correct format as required. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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We all question the nature of faith. As always, your work is well written and follows the correct format as required. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Evilynne, I truly appreciate your generosity and encouragement :-) Brooke
Comment from His Grayness
OH wow: Brooke: this needs a six and I just ran out! This is truly powerful in such lovely simplicity and so easy to embrace with true gratitude! Awesome! Vance
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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OH wow: Brooke: this needs a six and I just ran out! This is truly powerful in such lovely simplicity and so easy to embrace with true gratitude! Awesome! Vance
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Vance, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from hari anand
Simple yet powerful In its content, this quatraIn on the subject of faith shows the relevance of faith In ones life, enjoyed reading this one too.
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Simple yet powerful In its content, this quatraIn on the subject of faith shows the relevance of faith In ones life, enjoyed reading this one too.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 14-Jul-2014
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Hargunanand, thank you for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Trybuck
It's been written for all to read
Faith as small as a mustard seed
Can remove mountains from our eyes
For the questions asked, I have to surmise
Faith without love can do little
Might as well be playing a fiddle
But faith with love packs a powerful punch
Raises the dead and even provides lunch
Very well done, Buck
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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It's been written for all to read
Faith as small as a mustard seed
Can remove mountains from our eyes
For the questions asked, I have to surmise
Faith without love can do little
Might as well be playing a fiddle
But faith with love packs a powerful punch
Raises the dead and even provides lunch
Very well done, Buck
Comment Written 13-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2014
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Buck, how lovely to hear from you, my friend. Thanks so much for your poetic response and your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
