Is Faith the Wave?
rhyming quatrains120 total reviews
Comment from GRichards01
Nice job, adewpearl. I like the question "What is faith?"
refrain, alliteration, metaphors and the final answer .
Faith is breath of life, the greatest gift of humanity.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Nice job, adewpearl. I like the question "What is faith?"
refrain, alliteration, metaphors and the final answer .
Faith is breath of life, the greatest gift of humanity.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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GRichards, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from poetbear
Great image.
I like this genre.
This gives pause to lots of thinking and soul searching.
It is a very important reflective work.
Reads well and make sesne.
A work that promotes critical thinking is incredible.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Great image.
I like this genre.
This gives pause to lots of thinking and soul searching.
It is a very important reflective work.
Reads well and make sesne.
A work that promotes critical thinking is incredible.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Maddy, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Cin
How beautifully written and ponderous in the quest to define faith - faith that embodies confidence, truth, trustworthiness. An acceptance of an idea, person or thing without necessarily having materialistic proof - a deep awareness of an intrinsic nature.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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How beautifully written and ponderous in the quest to define faith - faith that embodies confidence, truth, trustworthiness. An acceptance of an idea, person or thing without necessarily having materialistic proof - a deep awareness of an intrinsic nature.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Cin, for your thoughtful review :-)Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
Excellent measure of faith. God , who is our pilot for all things is moved and pleased by faith. Faith is a form of obedience toward Him. Brooke, you did well as usual. Will meet you in the booth.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Excellent measure of faith. God , who is our pilot for all things is moved and pleased by faith. Faith is a form of obedience toward Him. Brooke, you did well as usual. Will meet you in the booth.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Ben, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from djsaxon
Haven't got my six packs back. Refreshing and thought provoking. Faith in what we love and believe in is everything. I sometimes run out of breath, but only for a moment. Warmest - DJ
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Haven't got my six packs back. Refreshing and thought provoking. Faith in what we love and believe in is everything. I sometimes run out of breath, but only for a moment. Warmest - DJ
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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DJ, thank you so much for a most thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Bryan G
This a beautiful poem. What is faith but the unknown. Like Columbus sailing for a distant shore when others said the world was flat or when Peter stepped out of the boat to walk on water towards Jesus. You have beautifully captured the concept of faith.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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This a beautiful poem. What is faith but the unknown. Like Columbus sailing for a distant shore when others said the world was flat or when Peter stepped out of the boat to walk on water towards Jesus. You have beautifully captured the concept of faith.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Bryan, I appreciate your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from krys123
Brooke;
Your considerate observation on faith is an obiter dictum and consideration that is very profound.
Also your imagination is simply marvelous as your imagery is dexterously descriptive and exquisitely it expressive throughout your poem.
Your rhyming quatrains are done very well where neither of your rhymes are neither forced nor labored and your rhythm and flow smoothly out your poem.
Good luck and a quatrain poetry contest for this is an excellent entry for winning.
Thank you for posting and sharing this for everyone to read and may all your endeavors the good ones.
Alex
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Brooke;
Your considerate observation on faith is an obiter dictum and consideration that is very profound.
Also your imagination is simply marvelous as your imagery is dexterously descriptive and exquisitely it expressive throughout your poem.
Your rhyming quatrains are done very well where neither of your rhymes are neither forced nor labored and your rhythm and flow smoothly out your poem.
Good luck and a quatrain poetry contest for this is an excellent entry for winning.
Thank you for posting and sharing this for everyone to read and may all your endeavors the good ones.
Alex
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Alex, than you for your kind contest wishes and your thoughtful reading of this poem :-) Brooke
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You are so sincerely welcome my dear friend.
Alex
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You are so sincerely welcome Brooke.
Alex
Comment from royowen
Faith and trust work hand in hand, one doesn't work without the other! Faith doesn't travel it just is, it switches on lights, turns on taps, gets up in the morning, it sees the supernatural, it is that natural, and yet it doesn't have eyes of flesh! Nice poem, Brooke, nice abcb rhyming, even meter! Good luck, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Faith and trust work hand in hand, one doesn't work without the other! Faith doesn't travel it just is, it switches on lights, turns on taps, gets up in the morning, it sees the supernatural, it is that natural, and yet it doesn't have eyes of flesh! Nice poem, Brooke, nice abcb rhyming, even meter! Good luck, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Roy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
I guess you're saying that faith is when we say 'yes!" to life, by 'going with the flow'. As always your rhyming is perfect and your rhythm outstanding. Good luck in the contest, Brooke.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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I guess you're saying that faith is when we say 'yes!" to life, by 'going with the flow'. As always your rhyming is perfect and your rhythm outstanding. Good luck in the contest, Brooke.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Adrienne, for your generous sixth star and kind good luck wishes and thoughtful reading of the poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Domino 2
Maybe 'to gain Your Holy pleasure.' in last line.
Just me feeling like irritating you, Brooke. LOL
On the other hand, maybe you're addressing ME rather than His Lordship. ;-)
Lovely short smooth read.
Cheers, Ray
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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Maybe 'to gain Your Holy pleasure.' in last line.
Just me feeling like irritating you, Brooke. LOL
On the other hand, maybe you're addressing ME rather than His Lordship. ;-)
Lovely short smooth read.
Cheers, Ray
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Ray, thanks for your review and my morning smile :-) Brooke
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You'll never improve if you don't take my 'classes' seriously, Brookers. LOL xx
