Horatio Had Many Plans
a bit of poetic whimsy128 total reviews
Comment from Eric1
I absolutely love your homely well structured poems Brooke, the photo is gorgeous, the poem is beautifully presented with a flow as graceful as the young lady who sashayed across the room to plant that magical kiss.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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I absolutely love your homely well structured poems Brooke, the photo is gorgeous, the poem is beautifully presented with a flow as graceful as the young lady who sashayed across the room to plant that magical kiss.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Eric, thanks so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome Brooke.
Comment from mommydear42
Hurray for Horatio. I was beginning to think you had deserted for the day. As always you have given your readers with what I think is an adorable children's poem. It is also a very poignant poem on an adult level. I love making plans, but they are always subject to change, as is my life. There
are too many factors that can change my immediate plans. The things that need to get done, always get done, but that doesn't mean I'm not flexible for change.
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Hurray for Horatio. I was beginning to think you had deserted for the day. As always you have given your readers with what I think is an adorable children's poem. It is also a very poignant poem on an adult level. I love making plans, but they are always subject to change, as is my life. There
are too many factors that can change my immediate plans. The things that need to get done, always get done, but that doesn't mean I'm not flexible for change.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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mommydear, thank you so very much for your generous sixth star and thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a beautiful picture that your nanny has caught here. The poem adds to this beautifully and creates a story that both Chloe and Sawyer will cherish when they get older. Well done again.
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This is a beautiful picture that your nanny has caught here. The poem adds to this beautifully and creates a story that both Chloe and Sawyer will cherish when they get older. Well done again.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Tomes, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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It was a pleasure.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the kiss that led the planned day astray, lol. I love that picture....
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this is very well written, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this quatrain poem about the kiss that led the planned day astray, lol. I love that picture....
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) The minute I saw the picture I knew I had to share it :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
Oh my, the Cute Little One looks terrified by the kiss. At that age, he probably didn't expect it :) This is very well written. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Oh my, the Cute Little One looks terrified by the kiss. At that age, he probably didn't expect it :) This is very well written. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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CR, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from honeytree
I love the art work here very much for these words.
I guess one is never to young to receive
a special kiss on ones cheek,that's life.
Annie
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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I love the art work here very much for these words.
I guess one is never to young to receive
a special kiss on ones cheek,that's life.
Annie
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Annie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Loved what you wrote.
Annie
Comment from kiwijenny
This has to be the cutest photo yet, Brooke.
Horatio and his well laid ,in slippers, plans came to naught.
How sweet of Chloe to plant that kiss...and the sheer joy of Sawyers face...is so cute
God bless
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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This has to be the cutest photo yet, Brooke.
Horatio and his well laid ,in slippers, plans came to naught.
How sweet of Chloe to plant that kiss...and the sheer joy of Sawyers face...is so cute
God bless
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Jenny, for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from acerisestory
What a funny picture, Brooke! That Sawyer is a total ham. Can't imagine why you are so crazy about him :) Your poem is beautifully written telling a very fun story. Wonderful rhyme, alliteration and enjambment. I loved it. Thank you, once again, for sharing your incredible talent with us, Brooke. Alana
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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What a funny picture, Brooke! That Sawyer is a total ham. Can't imagine why you are so crazy about him :) Your poem is beautifully written telling a very fun story. Wonderful rhyme, alliteration and enjambment. I loved it. Thank you, once again, for sharing your incredible talent with us, Brooke. Alana
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Alana, thank you so very much :-) He is one cutie pie, isn't he? LOL Brooke
Comment from sgalletti
Oh my!~ Does Sawyer now have a girlfriend? How fun to watch this young man growing up in your poetry and in Miranda's beautiful pictures. Can't wait to see what's going on when he is 16! Sue
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Oh my!~ Does Sawyer now have a girlfriend? How fun to watch this young man growing up in your poetry and in Miranda's beautiful pictures. Can't wait to see what's going on when he is 16! Sue
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Oh, this has been going on since last fall! LOL When he was first learning to talk he would make pretend phone calls to her. "Hello, Chloe. How are you?" LOL She's been planting kisses on him for a long time, and sometimes he even smooches her cheek. They used to just be neighborhood play dates, but now they share a nanny so get to see each other every afternoon :-) Thanks so much, Sue. Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
What a pleasant thought to retire with tonight. Sawyer, my friend, they did it again. Grandmother has staged the event. Great poem Brooke and the photo , well no words can describe the perfection. Blessings to all.
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What a pleasant thought to retire with tonight. Sawyer, my friend, they did it again. Grandmother has staged the event. Great poem Brooke and the photo , well no words can describe the perfection. Blessings to all.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, Ben :-) Brooke
