Horatio Had Many Plans
a bit of poetic whimsy128 total reviews
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Brooke - I kid you not I laughed so loud over this one the nurses looked up in complete shock.... I just loved Cutie Pie's expression - sorry my friend your post is great and so well expressed - but he has aced you high and dry with that shot. Brilliant job Miranda.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Dear Brooke - I kid you not I laughed so loud over this one the nurses looked up in complete shock.... I just loved Cutie Pie's expression - sorry my friend your post is great and so well expressed - but he has aced you high and dry with that shot. Brilliant job Miranda.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Maureen - I don't mind the least bit when my cutie pie and his mom upstage me :-) Brooke
Comment from Just2Write
If only all the little twists we find in life were kisses - Oh how wonderful things would be.
This is a charming little piece of whimsy, Brooke.
I wish I could look more learned and say something more intelligent, but I'm coming up blank. Everything is perfect. By the way - I love your 4 syllable name 'Horatio'.
There aren't too many of them these days - but the use of it in this poem is delightful.
Rose.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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If only all the little twists we find in life were kisses - Oh how wonderful things would be.
This is a charming little piece of whimsy, Brooke.
I wish I could look more learned and say something more intelligent, but I'm coming up blank. Everything is perfect. By the way - I love your 4 syllable name 'Horatio'.
There aren't too many of them these days - but the use of it in this poem is delightful.
Rose.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, my thoughtful friend :-) Brooke
Comment from sibhus
That picture is priceless, and goes great with the poem, but I suppose the picture came first. Great poem, it is a very fun read. The rhymes really tell a fun little tale of adventure. Good stuff there, Brooke.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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That picture is priceless, and goes great with the poem, but I suppose the picture came first. Great poem, it is a very fun read. The rhymes really tell a fun little tale of adventure. Good stuff there, Brooke.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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sibhus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brooke,
What a well written whimsy poem this is. I really enjoyed the read. The picture of Sawyer and Chloe is outstanding. I really like the expression on Sawyer's face. Bravo for this, all the way around.
Kat
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Hi Brooke,
What a well written whimsy poem this is. I really enjoyed the read. The picture of Sawyer and Chloe is outstanding. I really like the expression on Sawyer's face. Bravo for this, all the way around.
Kat
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Kat, I appreciate your visits to my portfolio today and your thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from livelylinda
Brooke: the exciting life of Sawyer as he examines bugs, beaches, books, boxes and babes! I love sugar and Sawyer's sweetness and innocence keep me sugar happy. Of course, grandma's words and mommy's pictures help create the entire dessert plate. Once again, bravo, for a delicious morning treat. Linda
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Brooke: the exciting life of Sawyer as he examines bugs, beaches, books, boxes and babes! I love sugar and Sawyer's sweetness and innocence keep me sugar happy. Of course, grandma's words and mommy's pictures help create the entire dessert plate. Once again, bravo, for a delicious morning treat. Linda
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Linda, thanks for the laugh and the review :-) Brooke
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Brooke,
You know whimsy always works well for me. I wish I could be more like Horatio because I like order. Unexpected visitors or plans make me jittery. Just ask my husband, lol.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Hi Brooke,
You know whimsy always works well for me. I wish I could be more like Horatio because I like order. Unexpected visitors or plans make me jittery. Just ask my husband, lol.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Lou, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Pyrrho
I was going to pass on reviewing this post because it left me unimpressed and wondering what the point was.
As I was about to click on the skip spot (or icon) the phrase "a bit of poetic whimsy" caught my eye and a new reason for the words dawned on my tired brain.
I never pass up whimsy, in fact I've led a lifetime of it. I even self-published a book of quatrains (principally) titled Apoplectic Aphorisms with a second title Whimsical Wisdom, so there!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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I was going to pass on reviewing this post because it left me unimpressed and wondering what the point was.
As I was about to click on the skip spot (or icon) the phrase "a bit of poetic whimsy" caught my eye and a new reason for the words dawned on my tired brain.
I never pass up whimsy, in fact I've led a lifetime of it. I even self-published a book of quatrains (principally) titled Apoplectic Aphorisms with a second title Whimsical Wisdom, so there!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Pyrrho, thank you for taking the time to revisit my poem and for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Smoothiecool
love your well penned words (as usual) to take the reader in
allows one to see and feel the picture portrayed
yes our days can often have unexpected turns
the surprise of the unsuspecting kiss LOL
good visual
good enjambment to allow free flow through out
good AB/CB rhyme theme
love this read makes me think of things in my grandchildren's lives
cheers..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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love your well penned words (as usual) to take the reader in
allows one to see and feel the picture portrayed
yes our days can often have unexpected turns
the surprise of the unsuspecting kiss LOL
good visual
good enjambment to allow free flow through out
good AB/CB rhyme theme
love this read makes me think of things in my grandchildren's lives
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 12-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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smoothiecool, thank you so very much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
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always welcome Brooke
cheers..SC >. Faye
Comment from lancellot
Ha, this is great and it reminds me so much of my own life. I too thought I had it all well planned until a little lady walked in. oh well, that's life.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Ha, this is great and it reminds me so much of my own life. I too thought I had it all well planned until a little lady walked in. oh well, that's life.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014
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Thank you, lancellot, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from liz10240
This is an enchanting little poem with superb rhyme and flow. It has a cute theme in that some interruptions in life are not so bad. I believe any child would enjoy this poem.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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This is an enchanting little poem with superb rhyme and flow. It has a cute theme in that some interruptions in life are not so bad. I believe any child would enjoy this poem.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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liz, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
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NP it is well deserved :)
