Horatio Had Many Plans
a bit of poetic whimsy128 total reviews
Comment from fairy77
Aww his first kiss. He looks surprised and delighted. This was great and well rhymed. I really enjoyed it. Sawyer's a character:)Still missing Gungalo:(beth hugs
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Aww his first kiss. He looks surprised and delighted. This was great and well rhymed. I really enjoyed it. Sawyer's a character:)Still missing Gungalo:(beth hugs
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Beth, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Aah, I just found a name for your poetry book, Brooke... Magic Moments! LOL and that look on Sawyer's face is a precious moment. I loved Chloe sashaying in to plant a kiss on his cheek - so sweet, Giddy
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Aah, I just found a name for your poetry book, Brooke... Magic Moments! LOL and that look on Sawyer's face is a precious moment. I loved Chloe sashaying in to plant a kiss on his cheek - so sweet, Giddy
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Giddy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Everybody has his/her plans set to follow or execute at a time, even kids but unexpected interruption or intrusion cause a derail. This is philosophical and applied to our day to day lives. Humorous too.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Everybody has his/her plans set to follow or execute at a time, even kids but unexpected interruption or intrusion cause a derail. This is philosophical and applied to our day to day lives. Humorous too.
ola thomas
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Ola, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
Sometimes we make plans and all words out well and other times something comes along to change those plans. Great abcb rhyme.
Teresa
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Sometimes we make plans and all words out well and other times something comes along to change those plans. Great abcb rhyme.
Teresa
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Teresa, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
The best laid plans of mice and men... poor Horatio (Sawyer) looks like he will have to go back to the drawing board and devise another plan. Knowing how fond he is of Chloe I really don't think he minds having his plans changed overmuch. Another absolutely delightful poem Brooke. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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The best laid plans of mice and men... poor Horatio (Sawyer) looks like he will have to go back to the drawing board and devise another plan. Knowing how fond he is of Chloe I really don't think he minds having his plans changed overmuch. Another absolutely delightful poem Brooke. Congratulations.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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nomi, thanks so much :-) He does really return her affections :-) Even when he and his parents went to Disneyworld for a week he talked about her every time he saw a Minnie Mouse character or picture because Minnie is Chloe's favorite :-) Brooke
Comment from Spitfire
Looks as if Sawyer had a loving admirer. Set this twenty years later and that unexpected guest could change his life, let alone the day. :-) Shari
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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Looks as if Sawyer had a loving admirer. Set this twenty years later and that unexpected guest could change his life, let alone the day. :-) Shari
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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Shari, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from flylikeaneagle
10 July 2014
Adewpearl: What a precious picture and poem. Plant a little kiss must have surprised Sawyer. I think he will remember the kiss more than his stack of books. So cute and fun! Great rhymes.
flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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10 July 2014
Adewpearl: What a precious picture and poem. Plant a little kiss must have surprised Sawyer. I think he will remember the kiss more than his stack of books. So cute and fun! Great rhymes.
flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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flylikeaneagle, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ha ha, Sawyer looks as if he's saying, "Now, just what the heck did she go and do THAT for? LOL...
Poor Horatio, alas, I knew him well. Okay, so it ain't Shakespeare! But, I do try.
Great rhyming, all throughout this poem, Brooke. A good, solid story (and a cute one, at that), with a wonderfully adorable picture to back it all up. Not that you needed it, but it did add to the...ambiance.
Great work!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Ha ha, Sawyer looks as if he's saying, "Now, just what the heck did she go and do THAT for? LOL...
Poor Horatio, alas, I knew him well. Okay, so it ain't Shakespeare! But, I do try.
Great rhyming, all throughout this poem, Brooke. A good, solid story (and a cute one, at that), with a wonderfully adorable picture to back it all up. Not that you needed it, but it did add to the...ambiance.
Great work!
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Thanks for the laugh and the review, Dean :-) Brooke
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8>} My pleasure, Brooke. Anytime for you, darlin', LOL...
Comment from ArtGal
ROFL!!! Has Horatio ever been more shocked than this??? Oh yes, there are many times that we have our days set out for us, and know exactly what we are going to do. And then, that unexpected twist comes along, and our plans go flying out the window! If I were Horatio, I think my expression might have been a bit different, if I were to receive a kiss by a handsome man who obviously was interested in me, you just might see a big smile on my face! Please tell him to start enjoying these kisses, because as he grows up, he'll be getting a lot more of them, to his parent's dismay!!!. . .Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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ROFL!!! Has Horatio ever been more shocked than this??? Oh yes, there are many times that we have our days set out for us, and know exactly what we are going to do. And then, that unexpected twist comes along, and our plans go flying out the window! If I were Horatio, I think my expression might have been a bit different, if I were to receive a kiss by a handsome man who obviously was interested in me, you just might see a big smile on my face! Please tell him to start enjoying these kisses, because as he grows up, he'll be getting a lot more of them, to his parent's dismay!!!. . .Sharon
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Sharon, thank you so much :-) I love the picture too!! Chloe actually kisses him quite often, and usually he is quite serene in the pictures. I even have pictures of him kissing her on the cheek, so heaven only knows what got into him for this picture. LOL Brooke :-)
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And the cutest picture I've ever seen, lolol!!!
Comment from Cin
The allurement of kids and the way they can adapt so easily to the spur of the moment! Lovely light-hearted poem, strong rhyme that envelops the delightfulness of childhood. The look on Horatio's face is priceless, is it not :-)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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The allurement of kids and the way they can adapt so easily to the spur of the moment! Lovely light-hearted poem, strong rhyme that envelops the delightfulness of childhood. The look on Horatio's face is priceless, is it not :-)
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014
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Cin, thank you so much :-) It is one helluva picture! Brooke :-)
