Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem seems to mine the heart of one who has broken off a relationship that was already busted. Many will read this and remember when this moment occurred in their life's. Nice job.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2014

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Thanks Bill

Comment from Ekim777

Excellent

We have a philosophical poet in our didst. "It is better to have loved and lost, than not to have loved at all." Does not love turn the world around? And yet can we say that human love is eternal. NO! Like life it is ever changing and transforming itself. Is not love infinite? It is about as infinite and life and death. Let us become aware of these new realities and become wise. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2014

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Thanks Ekim

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

A sad poem of loss which does not always make the heart grow fonder. Well written and evokes emotion which is something I look for in poetry. Take care, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2014

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Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas

Excellent

Simple message of pain and love...the artwork goes well with the lines, a way too simple diction for my liking though. The rhyme seems absent, but there is still flow in this free verse. Overall enjoyable

K

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2014

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Comment from topanga01

Excellent

hi,Very good writing, very sad certainly but a big truth, excellent work is told. 
my excuses if my English is not good, greetings 

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2014

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Thank you

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi deepwater, this is a sad and very poignant poem, but it is also full of truth, this has happened to every reader at some stage of their life, I feel your pain through the well structured and strong lines, the artwork is the cherry on the cake for your beautifully neaningful words.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014

Thank you Eric

reply by Eric1 on 11-Jul-2014

You are welcome my friend.

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

There's a deep sadness that can't be avoided as you write about facing the truth. I feel you could add much more here to give this clarity, as you use: 'things' which is very vague. You've got emotions to build. Just a thought. Like the quickness of : "Set, ready, move on," Sometimes, it moves like that. Very nicely written. Les

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2014

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Thanks Les

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I like this very much.....................in courage I was first to face the truth....
That does take courage ....and this is sad...............................cold was her heart for the man she had loved.......so sad
God bless

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

In courage I was first to face that truth,
Set, ready, move on,
Knowing the end was close, if not gone,
Simply but wisely stated --First you face the fact and then move on. Most times we know when the relationship has come to an end and still hang on

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A sad and poignant piece. But then reality can really be sad. Great artwork and presentation. Sounds like a love affair gone bad. Good write.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014

Thanks Jm