Writings From the Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "We Live On"A book of Poetry & Writing
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Comment from l.raven
HI Gary, in some cases I would say yes...in others I'm not so sure....but we do live on...very well written...and the perfect picture....Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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HI Gary, in some cases I would say yes...in others I'm not so sure....but we do live on...very well written...and the perfect picture....Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Jul-2014
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thanks Linda
Comment from Caressa_08
It happens to so many..The one who stays, to hear the news, usually suffers more in the beginning...The other one, well, he or she, & male, in this poem probably wasn't for keeps in the first place...We Live On, at least is a good title to realize to move on & at least it was for a time & maybe, for some it was a very pleasurable experience while it lasted..
Caressa
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It happens to so many..The one who stays, to hear the news, usually suffers more in the beginning...The other one, well, he or she, & male, in this poem probably wasn't for keeps in the first place...We Live On, at least is a good title to realize to move on & at least it was for a time & maybe, for some it was a very pleasurable experience while it lasted..
Caressa
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
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thank you
Comment from honeytree
The art work is very interesting for the words written.
Love can be a very hurtful word and puzzling word at times.
Love can grow and fade within our lives.
honey tree
The art work is great here for these words.
We meet many people within our lives.
We fall in love
we feel hurtful
ways and vibrations.
I guess life can be like that.
honey tree
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The art work is very interesting for the words written.
Love can be a very hurtful word and puzzling word at times.
Love can grow and fade within our lives.
honey tree
The art work is great here for these words.
We meet many people within our lives.
We fall in love
we feel hurtful
ways and vibrations.
I guess life can be like that.
honey tree
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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thanks for reading
Gary
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Loved what you wrote.
honey tree
Comment from fairy77
Nice one. I could feel the distress:(It was well worded and rhymed and displayed and I felt it deserving of six stars. You did a great job. Well deserved!beth fairy77.
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Nice one. I could feel the distress:(It was well worded and rhymed and displayed and I felt it deserving of six stars. You did a great job. Well deserved!beth fairy77.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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thank you Fairy for this and reading
Gary
Comment from acerisestory
Your poem is nicely written about a place in life that many have sadly faced. Your lines have a smooth flow. Nice use of alliteration in "first to face" and "friends or fame." The accompanying artwork beautifully enhances your message. Thanks for sharing. Alana
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Your poem is nicely written about a place in life that many have sadly faced. Your lines have a smooth flow. Nice use of alliteration in "first to face" and "friends or fame." The accompanying artwork beautifully enhances your message. Thanks for sharing. Alana
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you for reading
Comment from Righteous Riter
The photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good alliteration with first/face...her/heart...for/friends/fame. I see nothing that I would add, change or take out of this piece.
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The photo compliments the piece well as the words bring the photo to life. Good alliteration with first/face...her/heart...for/friends/fame. I see nothing that I would add, change or take out of this piece.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
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Thanks for reading
Comment from bob cullen
A true portrait of life today.
Why is it when we are so advantaged by science, technology and ease of life we struggle with perhaps the easiest part of life, relationships.
Our parents and grandparents had none of todays toys, yet they had mastered the art of family life
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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A true portrait of life today.
Why is it when we are so advantaged by science, technology and ease of life we struggle with perhaps the easiest part of life, relationships.
Our parents and grandparents had none of todays toys, yet they had mastered the art of family life
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
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Thanks bob
Comment from Christine B.
The pause of this piece has a unique pervasiveness. The recalling of withdrawn willingness to accept what cannot be with the mind's eye admitting what it sees.
Well managed!
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The pause of this piece has a unique pervasiveness. The recalling of withdrawn willingness to accept what cannot be with the mind's eye admitting what it sees.
Well managed!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you
Comment from rrabinow
That feeling is relatable to me. Cause after my breakup my hear was cold towards my ex after how I came to see how I was treated, and when I realized that the end was close if not gone. So true. Great job!
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That feeling is relatable to me. Cause after my breakup my hear was cold towards my ex after how I came to see how I was treated, and when I realized that the end was close if not gone. So true. Great job!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you
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You are welcome!
Comment from TheWriteTeach
This is a sad piece, but it speaks of a truth that many of us can identify with. Who hasn't been in a relationship that went sour? Things started out great, but for some reason or another, it soon petered out.
Nice job with this piece.
Suzanne
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This is a sad piece, but it speaks of a truth that many of us can identify with. Who hasn't been in a relationship that went sour? Things started out great, but for some reason or another, it soon petered out.
Nice job with this piece.
Suzanne
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you
