Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interestint read. There is good imagery. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014

Charlie, thank you so much for your kind contest wishes and thoughtful review :-) Brooke

reply by c_lucas on 09-Jul-2014

You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Brooke - this is a lovely faith poem. Great flowing lines and strong rhymes i enjoyed the feel of this one. As if in reflection of the sacred beauty and truth that surrounds us when we ponder out journey with faith.
Loved it and good luck.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014

Maureen, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from lakeport

Excellent

In a time before waters, indeed without water there be no life,that's a beautiful ecpressed poem, nice rhyming. I enjoyed reading it,God bless you, Hugs!lakeport.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014

Lakeport, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by lakeport on 09-Jul-2014

your very welcome,Hugs!lakeport.

Comment from costellsgirl33

Excellent

"I remember all Creation,
from the firmament to sea,
and then I stop to thank the Lord
for all He's given me".

This is great faith based poem. I especially love the ending. Great job and good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014

costellsgirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by costellsgirl33 on 10-Jul-2014

You're welcome Brooke :). I truly enjoy your work

Arnetta

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

The world is so full of wonder, but we can easily forget what we must be grateful to God for. Well chosen words and rhymes to convey your lovely spiritual message. Good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014

Faye, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from InterestingRon

Excellent

Hi Brooke,
A powerful entry for the Faith Contest.
I had a glimpse of early life when I worked, for a US company, in the African country now known as Namibia. Primitive desert plants had no roots. They sucked moisture out of morning sea mists. The world must have been strange long ago.
Good luck in the contest!
Ron x

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014

Ron, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Bobby Jo

Excellent

This poem is really cool and fun, I appreciate you taking the time to remind us where we stand in the creation of Christ. Great poem.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014

Bobby Jo, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That is lovely, Brooke, and it would make a lovely hymn as well. You have captured the essence of the birth of our planet, and you've done it well. Good luck in the contest. xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014

Thank you so much, Sandra :-) Brooke

Comment from granny goes viral

Excellent

Another on for the Greeting Card section.

I only have one comment, and that is coming from what I am doing now with old poems. I have been trying to cut down on the use of And. Using that spot to take a mental breath, to make the reading more dramatic.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014

thanks, granny, for your thoughtful feedback :-) Brooke

Comment from Kingsrookviii

Excellent

I enjoyed everything about this poem. It has a wonderful and uplifting message and the contrast of color with your picture are a fantastic combo. I wish you well in the contest. This would be a great bookmark for a family bible.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014

Kingsrook, thank you so much for your kind contest wishes and thoughtful review :-) Brooke