In a Time before the Waters
rhyming quatrains141 total reviews
Comment from fairy77
Loved this one Brooke:)I have been through a rough period and am feeling better in time for my 37th birthday! Thanks for brightening my day.beth hugs.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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Loved this one Brooke:)I have been through a rough period and am feeling better in time for my 37th birthday! Thanks for brightening my day.beth hugs.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Beth - I'm sorry to hear you haven't been feeling well. Happy Birthday :-) Brooke
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thanks I will be 37 my god. It was my pms friend:)hugs beth. First time in ten months I had a period so I can't complain. Thanks for your wishes. We've celebrated twice already LOL!
Comment from janalma
Lovely poem that speaks of the doubt we all must deal with sometimes, and the comforting feeling when we kick it out and decide to just have faith. I've been there and done that so many times. Part of trying to adjust to everything that happens to us, I guess. Very nice. I enjoyed it, and loved the descriptive passages about the world before it was 'filled.'
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Lovely poem that speaks of the doubt we all must deal with sometimes, and the comforting feeling when we kick it out and decide to just have faith. I've been there and done that so many times. Part of trying to adjust to everything that happens to us, I guess. Very nice. I enjoyed it, and loved the descriptive passages about the world before it was 'filled.'
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Janalma, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Beautifully written and presented, Brooke. A great message of hope and gratitude. It must be the day for writing about the sea. I just posted one too. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Beautifully written and presented, Brooke. A great message of hope and gratitude. It must be the day for writing about the sea. I just posted one too. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Debbie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from kintesiegel
I love the first stanzas that set the stage for the creation. It is wonderful the way you can capture life in images. I also like the pivot to the personal and the gift of faith.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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I love the first stanzas that set the stage for the creation. It is wonderful the way you can capture life in images. I also like the pivot to the personal and the gift of faith.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Bev, for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawny53
I have come to a point in my life where I am really doubting my faith. After reading this poem I find myself re thinking my feelings once again. I was drawn to read this because I knew after seeing your name that it would probably be worth the read. Thanks for giving me something to think about that matters.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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I have come to a point in my life where I am really doubting my faith. After reading this poem I find myself re thinking my feelings once again. I was drawn to read this because I knew after seeing your name that it would probably be worth the read. Thanks for giving me something to think about that matters.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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Dawny, thank you so much for sharing your thoughtful response to this poem with me :-) Brooke
Comment from w.j.debi
This is a wonderful declaration of faith that has such a serene and timeless feeling to it.
Gratitude is has such a healing effect.
Excellent rhymes in your quatrains. Effective descriptions to create vivid imagery.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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This is a wonderful declaration of faith that has such a serene and timeless feeling to it.
Gratitude is has such a healing effect.
Excellent rhymes in your quatrains. Effective descriptions to create vivid imagery.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Debi, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bina1
My this is lovely! It has such a smooth rhyme and feel to it. Good luck in the contest, a fine entry you offer here. I love the art work, very unique!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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My this is lovely! It has such a smooth rhyme and feel to it. Good luck in the contest, a fine entry you offer here. I love the art work, very unique!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Bina, thank you so much for your generous rating and kind contest wishes :-) Brooke
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Brooke,
This was a very interesting write, putting yourself in a time before creation and using your imagination to follow the placement of life on Earth. Nicely composed and very imaginative--Ted
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Dear Brooke,
This was a very interesting write, putting yourself in a time before creation and using your imagination to follow the placement of life on Earth. Nicely composed and very imaginative--Ted
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Ted, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from GWinterwin
Great poem with a great message, especially for those of us who believe in almighty God, and his creation. Your word flow and rhyming make it specially good.
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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Great poem with a great message, especially for those of us who believe in almighty God, and his creation. Your word flow and rhyming make it specially good.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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GWinterwin, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a wonderful reminder to all that we must always be grateful; that 'this, too, shall pass'. There are always going to be rough times in life, but there is always hope for whatever tomorrow may bring.
As always, Brooke, simply beautiful! *******************!!!
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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What a wonderful reminder to all that we must always be grateful; that 'this, too, shall pass'. There are always going to be rough times in life, but there is always hope for whatever tomorrow may bring.
As always, Brooke, simply beautiful! *******************!!!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2014
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Dawn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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The pleasure's all mine, Brooke!
