Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

Salvation by singing "Paper Roses" and the return of the thinking cat, that vice grip that the Bard put on Winston- I'm beginning to see the tales of the Bard as Picaresque. Humor is definitely your forte.

 Comment Written 11-Jul-2014

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

OH Michael, just can't help laughing...you so make me laugh...Wayne...and...Marie...on a roof singing paper roses...and Bard...were do you come up with this stuff you...LOL...I told you...I can just hear this stuff coming to your head....LOL...but I love it...a great chapter you...you make me smile...next...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014

I don't know. My wife hit me over the head with a frying pan and this all just came spilling out! Hahaha. Glad you liked it. Thank you so much. mikey

reply by l.raven on 11-Jul-2014

I love it you goof...and tell your wife to keep up the good work...LOL...goodnight...your the last...you both sleep tight...luff

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

That was a good chapter, the action on the roof was well described and it had a good resolution. Good dialogue and characters. Most enjoyable as always. Faye

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 11-Jul-2014

I'm pleased you enjoyed it. I've been slowing down the pace I write this and letting it run through my little brain a bit longer. Hahaha. Hope it shows!! Thank you, mikey

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Dialogue conveys the intense emotions of the characters well - powerful situation where the child explains why she would return to these captors
He motioned to Marie Osmond, who pretended - add the comma
Wayne and Marie doing a duet of Paper Roses - old folks like me are all going to be laughing their heads off over this
Where are you, Barry - add the comma
Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

Sometimes one just needs a little hope, and Angela gave that to the rest of the captives. Winston is not having a good day, and I had a good chuckle at your descriptions. Very well done. Good for the Bard.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2014

Comment from Selina Stambi

Excellent

Another helter-skelter race of a chapter that left me quite breathless, Mikey. :)

I sang Paper Roses along with Wayne. Thanks for the memories ... Sonny, Tito, etc. (I got you babe!)

Have a wonderful rest of the week.

Sonali







others stopped to catch their (breath).

hungry newborn baby would follow Dolly Parton... if newborns could follow, of course. (Love the line - speaks volumes!!)

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

Comment from nordicgirl

Exceptional

You continue to infuse humor into the story at just the right level. Any more would make it farcical. You maintain that sharp edge where the Bard can jump into action and it is still in tune with his character. Killer!!!NG

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Phew! Sure glad that's over. Nicely done, by the way.

like a hungry newborn baby would follow Dolly Parton. << Still laughing at this line! LOL

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

Comment from nelliesellie

Excellent

They got Winston and saved the hostages. The Bard convinced Winston to tell him where the girl is. She has escaped. has escaped. But the cat is still trapped. The crew is rushing to the girl's aid. They need to catch Elsa. Great work.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014

Finally got em off the roof. Now the chase is on. Thank you kindly, mikey

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Loved Wayne Newton songs especially paper roses he sure made his millions singing his way across country so did John Denver and Ricky Nelson

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014

Those were the days! Johnny Crawford too. He's still around. Of course, Wayne is too, going strong. mikey