Clarity
contemplative quatrains152 total reviews
Comment from lappmellott
Loved the photograph of Sawyer. He's a wonderful little boy. I have to say that I truly loved your poem and the asymmetry between clarity and black and white is so true. I am currently writing a autobiography and I've entitled it: White to Black (With Many shades in between)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Loved the photograph of Sawyer. He's a wonderful little boy. I have to say that I truly loved your poem and the asymmetry between clarity and black and white is so true. I am currently writing a autobiography and I've entitled it: White to Black (With Many shades in between)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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lappmellott, thank you so much :-) I like your book title :-) Brooke
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You're welcome.
Comment from DanielEkine
Clarity has to make itself known to the brilliance of this author. Very contemplative and refreshing. The author note agrees with the work from the author. Very precise and eloquent. I am so glad I enjoyed the rhyme of the work. It's precious to the author. I can feel it through.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Clarity has to make itself known to the brilliance of this author. Very contemplative and refreshing. The author note agrees with the work from the author. Very precise and eloquent. I am so glad I enjoyed the rhyme of the work. It's precious to the author. I can feel it through.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014
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Daniel, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from abbasjoy
I truly love your writing, Brooke. It is simple, but always has such truths, which get us thinking.
I like the pictures of Sawyer, it adds to the naturalness of the poem and draws in the reader.
It is so true that it is very difficult sometimes to distinguish your answers in black and white, for often fogginess takes over and we are never sure whether we are actually making the right decision.
Loved it.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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I truly love your writing, Brooke. It is simple, but always has such truths, which get us thinking.
I like the pictures of Sawyer, it adds to the naturalness of the poem and draws in the reader.
It is so true that it is very difficult sometimes to distinguish your answers in black and white, for often fogginess takes over and we are never sure whether we are actually making the right decision.
Loved it.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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abbasjoy, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, no aww this time - more like awe, my friend. Seriously! Brooke, the way your mind works is amazing; this poem is amazing. "The way the greys keep popping up..." <
(Btw - great shot of Sawyer - quite different from the usual kid picture - she, too is so talented. I did tell you photography is my other love, right?)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Wow, no aww this time - more like awe, my friend. Seriously! Brooke, the way your mind works is amazing; this poem is amazing. "The way the greys keep popping up..." <
(Btw - great shot of Sawyer - quite different from the usual kid picture - she, too is so talented. I did tell you photography is my other love, right?)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Dawn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome!
Comment from donnadiann
Good rhyming and great child's tone of wonderment. Very good questioning words, ifs, whens, and whys. Great photo of Sawyer. Very nice poem:)
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Good rhyming and great child's tone of wonderment. Very good questioning words, ifs, whens, and whys. Great photo of Sawyer. Very nice poem:)
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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donnadiann, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from acerisestory
I like the message of your poem, Brooke: life is not all blacks and whites; probably more gray than anything else. Sawyer will learn that soon enough, I suppose. Nice use of alliteration: whens/whys; clarity/call. Of course, the flow is wonderful, and the rhyming and enjambment are right on. And, let's see, Sawyer is as cute as ever. Thank you for sharing. Alana
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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I like the message of your poem, Brooke: life is not all blacks and whites; probably more gray than anything else. Sawyer will learn that soon enough, I suppose. Nice use of alliteration: whens/whys; clarity/call. Of course, the flow is wonderful, and the rhyming and enjambment are right on. And, let's see, Sawyer is as cute as ever. Thank you for sharing. Alana
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Alana, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from costellsgirl33
This is a wonderful poem and it was very well written. And I love the picture of Sawyer, such a beautiful background to go with your lovely poem.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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This is a wonderful poem and it was very well written. And I love the picture of Sawyer, such a beautiful background to go with your lovely poem.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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costellsgirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome Brooke :)
Arnetta
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
Those doggarned greys! Always clouding the issue, making the simple complex, never letting one get a straight answer ...
Good poetic way to say it neatly.
Patrick
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Those doggarned greys! Always clouding the issue, making the simple complex, never letting one get a straight answer ...
Good poetic way to say it neatly.
Patrick
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Patrick, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from amahra
Sawyer is really getting big. That picture of him in your profile with the windmill flag sees him all legs. Loved the rhyme scheme. Your rhythm is always perfect. I like: when and why and blur and black.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Sawyer is really getting big. That picture of him in your profile with the windmill flag sees him all legs. Loved the rhyme scheme. Your rhythm is always perfect. I like: when and why and blur and black.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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Brooke, who's Nancy? Smile
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sorry - she was the reviewer whose review was right after yours on my list. I got mixed up when scrolling :-)
Comment from mommydear42
Well, my lady, you've done it again today and probably will again tomorrow. Do you just sit around writing poems all day? It seems like it. At lease this one didn't pull at the heart string as many of them do. Thank you for sharing your very clever poem.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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Well, my lady, you've done it again today and probably will again tomorrow. Do you just sit around writing poems all day? It seems like it. At lease this one didn't pull at the heart string as many of them do. Thank you for sharing your very clever poem.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014
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mommydear, thank you so much for your generous sixth star and thoughtful review :-) Brooke
