Comment from joneau2

Excellent

A very interesting chapter in the continuing saga that you've managed to conjure up. Your writing is so flawless. I never expect to find a single fault, and true to form ... I don't.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2014

You're very kind, thank you

Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

LOL! Poor Oz. It's pretty rough trying to find help for a problem when you can't talk about it. Ess has to find an outlet.
Well done, snod. Fast paced dialogue. Sparse, terse, gets to the point quickly. You're portraying Ess as a cool, together kind of gal. I like her.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014

Oh good. I try and walk the line between her being perfect and all-powerful and being insecure and uncertain. I'm glad she comes across as cool

Comment from Sonaleeka

Excellent

clever and well written builds up to a great ending and love the presentation too well written my friend and thank you

Worth reading and god bless.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014

No, thank you. Glad you liked it

reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014

And how refreshing to see it garnered exactly the same review as so many others you've read

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

I haven't read much of the previous chapters, but this is well written and makes for an interesting read. It appears Dorothy don't quite believe Ess doesn't know how the substance came to be on her hands and nails. I found no obvious errors.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Jul-2014

Thanks. Glad it worked for you.