Let's Make a Trapeze!
Millie remembers the circus.25 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
What a cute story. Isn't that just like kids to want to emulate the things they witness in life like a circus trapese. Of course they only made a swing. LOL! It was very handy to have reggie to tie the swing on the tree for them! I do enjoy your little critters and their antics. No nits! Good job! Nancy
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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What a cute story. Isn't that just like kids to want to emulate the things they witness in life like a circus trapese. Of course they only made a swing. LOL! It was very handy to have reggie to tie the swing on the tree for them! I do enjoy your little critters and their antics. No nits! Good job! Nancy
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Oh, Nancy, thank you my dear sweet friend. I have had a couple of horrible days. You have put a little sunshine into it. Thank you so much for this wonderful review, and for the 6star rating. I will love you forever!!! :) Sandra
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Oh! I hope your knee is okay! I am much improved and getting stronger each day. Hugs. Nancy
Comment from Ben Colder
Like the other, the write is a very good children story with such simplicity of innocence using animals but does it really qualify as script? Is it stage, movie,? Google shows 5 ways to write script; perhaps I missed this type. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Like the other, the write is a very good children story with such simplicity of innocence using animals but does it really qualify as script? Is it stage, movie,? Google shows 5 ways to write script; perhaps I missed this type. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Hi Ben, it isn't and wasn't ever a script, I have sent a message to Tom, but he hasn't come back to me yet. I wouldn't have a clue about scripts! Thank you for your comments on my story, I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. (Hope Tom hurries up and answers! LOL) xsx Sandra
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He will change it for you. I cautioned before some person made an ugly remark. I think this should be published into a children gallery. It is very good and you have a talent for it. My blessings to you.
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I did put it into the children's section, it's there, but in Children's Script!! Never mind. And as for nasty remarks, I had the worst ever last week, I nearly gave up coming on here. It hurts like hell to be slated with vicious language. But then I thought, why should I leave a place I love because of a moron. Thank you, Ben for being concerned. xsx
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Sandra, I love these stories about those hedgerow characters. Their interactions so filled with wonderment and joyous simple fun. What a wondrous and beautiful life you have created. Though it is fiction, Sandra, you make these stories seem so very real. Congratulations for having and sharing your talent with the world. Love you very much my friend,,,,,,,,Jim xxx
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Sandra, I love these stories about those hedgerow characters. Their interactions so filled with wonderment and joyous simple fun. What a wondrous and beautiful life you have created. Though it is fiction, Sandra, you make these stories seem so very real. Congratulations for having and sharing your talent with the world. Love you very much my friend,,,,,,,,Jim xxx
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Hi Jim, my very dear friend, thank you so much for this 6 star review! You have made my day! You praise me too much though, Jim, my head may begin to swell!! :) Did you get my reply to your e-mail? I hope so, I can't wait to read the rest of Cody and Alex. Love you too, Jim! :) Sandra
Comment from IndianaIrish
Your story is wonderful, Sandra, and so very enjoyable. Your characters are a delight and I'm sure kids will love them. I am wondering why you have it listed under Script instead of short works.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Your story is wonderful, Sandra, and so very enjoyable. Your characters are a delight and I'm sure kids will love them. I am wondering why you have it listed under Script instead of short works.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Hi Karyn, I have no idea how it went into Scripts! I have sent a message to Tom. Thank you for letting me know. I'm so pleased you enjoyed the story though!! :) Thank you so much. xsx SAndra
Comment from Smoothiecool
your story flows well with vivid images to allow the reader to see and feel the adventure of Millie and Vicky wanting make a trapeze to swing on and the drama that unfolded with Cyril
flows well keeps reader engaged till end
could not see any SPAGS
cheers..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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your story flows well with vivid images to allow the reader to see and feel the adventure of Millie and Vicky wanting make a trapeze to swing on and the drama that unfolded with Cyril
flows well keeps reader engaged till end
could not see any SPAGS
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Smoothiecool, you always put a smile on my face. Thank you. xsx Sandra
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thanks Sandra
always welcome..SC >. Faye
Comment from heyjude
Sandra, another one of your wonderful children's
stories. I have to confess I enjoy reading them.
I love the characters you have in your story. Cyril
was so intent on eating the nuts he loved until his
friends needed his help. I like his line ...That
would be tickety boo!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Sandra, another one of your wonderful children's
stories. I have to confess I enjoy reading them.
I love the characters you have in your story. Cyril
was so intent on eating the nuts he loved until his
friends needed his help. I like his line ...That
would be tickety boo!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much! Tickety boo, is Cyril's way of saying everything is alright now, he uses it in almost all the stories. :) It's nice that you liked it, thank you my friend. xsx Sandra
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Cute story and encourages kids to keep moving... too many today sit in the house with electronics and don't run and play and keep their muscles healthy.
Found a nit for you: "Have your brought the rope
Typo on YOU
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Cute story and encourages kids to keep moving... too many today sit in the house with electronics and don't run and play and keep their muscles healthy.
Found a nit for you: "Have your brought the rope
Typo on YOU
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Thank you, Phyllis, I went in with my big gun. Needless to say, it died a painful death! :) Sandra. xsx
Comment from Dawn Munro
"That would be tickety boo!" << one of my all-time favorite sayings from those good ol' days. LOL
What a charmer, yet again, Sandra - I just LOVE your writing! I've had only 3 hours sleep, trying to catch up a little reviewing, but it's a losing battle, I'm afraid. This was just what I needed to give me a boost. :0)
Your 'voice' is amazing - I swear I can see and hear you reading to a sea of small faces riveted to the words coming out of your mouth. :)
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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"That would be tickety boo!" << one of my all-time favorite sayings from those good ol' days. LOL
What a charmer, yet again, Sandra - I just LOVE your writing! I've had only 3 hours sleep, trying to catch up a little reviewing, but it's a losing battle, I'm afraid. This was just what I needed to give me a boost. :0)
Your 'voice' is amazing - I swear I can see and hear you reading to a sea of small faces riveted to the words coming out of your mouth. :)
Comment Written 07-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Thank you so much, Dawn. Your sleep in more important than reviews! Some of the older reviews you should delete. I learnt that from someone here who is always getting 150 - 200 reviews per poem, and sometimes she has 2 or 3 on at the same time. She couldn't possibly reply to the all. I'm really pleased you liked this one, thanks my friend. xsx Sandra.
Comment from jmdg1954
After a while Cyril began to (puffing and panting) puff and pant until he couldn't push them any more
Again I'm not a corrector of sorts as I've previously stated, but check it out first
Great sequel to the first story. Enjoyed reading it immensely. John
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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After a while Cyril began to (puffing and panting) puff and pant until he couldn't push them any more
Again I'm not a corrector of sorts as I've previously stated, but check it out first
Great sequel to the first story. Enjoyed reading it immensely. John
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Thank you so very much, John, for your lovely review! I went back in and shot that little nit!! :) Sandra
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Sandra:)
This is a great sequel to, 'The Circus is Here' story. I'm certain small children will be delighted. The names you use for Hedgerow character are so creative.
I did find two sneaky nits:
1. Cyril looked at [the] Millie and Vicky standing on the ground looking up at him.Delete the unneeded article 'the' as shown.}
2. After a while Cyril began [to] puffing and panting until he couldn't push them any more. {Delete 'to' as shown.}
Love and Irish Hugs for entertaining the wee ones.
Roger
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Hi Sandra:)
This is a great sequel to, 'The Circus is Here' story. I'm certain small children will be delighted. The names you use for Hedgerow character are so creative.
I did find two sneaky nits:
1. Cyril looked at [the] Millie and Vicky standing on the ground looking up at him.Delete the unneeded article 'the' as shown.}
2. After a while Cyril began [to] puffing and panting until he couldn't push them any more. {Delete 'to' as shown.}
Love and Irish Hugs for entertaining the wee ones.
Roger
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Thank you so very much, Roger! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have been back into the poem and killed them both off! How dare they! :) LOL Sandra. xsx Sandra
