Bel Air: A Bard's Guide
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "The Bard's Hat, Kids On the Run"Sequel to The Bard of Bel Air.
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Comment from thedreampeddler
Excellent storytelling skills. The characters are really well built, and the dialog is great.
The plot seems cool and the speed of movement is nice.
Nicely done.
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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Excellent storytelling skills. The characters are really well built, and the dialog is great.
The plot seems cool and the speed of movement is nice.
Nicely done.
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014
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Glad you enjoyed it. I have a lot of characters running around, so I'm pleased you find them well rounded. Thanks a million, mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
You are back on track in a big way now. Action everywhere!! I love your signature off the wall zany cat dialogue and the Sgts reaction to the cat. Toooo funny!!!! NG
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You are back on track in a big way now. Action everywhere!! I love your signature off the wall zany cat dialogue and the Sgts reaction to the cat. Toooo funny!!!! NG
Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
Comment from adewpearl
wouldn't believe it, lady - add comma for direct address
I like the shifts in POV, which underscore the hectic nature of these goings on
I'm still laughing at the Sergeant's girly reaction to the cute cat LOL :-) Brooke
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wouldn't believe it, lady - add comma for direct address
I like the shifts in POV, which underscore the hectic nature of these goings on
I'm still laughing at the Sergeant's girly reaction to the cute cat LOL :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2014
