The Library Book Drop
a rhyming poem in 6/5/6/5134 total reviews
Comment from kintesiegel
I just love to read your poetry and hope that you have put it all into several books and shared it with the rest of the world. Not only did I smile at the loveliness of this poem but I was awed by your imagination and sense of fun. Thank you so much.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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I just love to read your poetry and hope that you have put it all into several books and shared it with the rest of the world. Not only did I smile at the loveliness of this poem but I was awed by your imagination and sense of fun. Thank you so much.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Bev, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Just Pete
I would have awarded this six (if I had them). Not only a well rhymed poem, the subject is so original, something seldom thought about. You have brought that gaping mouth to life and gave it a new meaning. Pete
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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I would have awarded this six (if I had them). Not only a well rhymed poem, the subject is so original, something seldom thought about. You have brought that gaping mouth to life and gave it a new meaning. Pete
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, Pete :-) Brooke
Comment from Kingsland
You should do a book of children's poetry, as you are so very good at it. You also have a knack for finding words in poetry to thrill all ages. This was an excellent piece of poetic art to have read and written this response for... John
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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You should do a book of children's poetry, as you are so very good at it. You also have a knack for finding words in poetry to thrill all ages. This was an excellent piece of poetic art to have read and written this response for... John
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Thanks so much, John, for your review and encouragement :-) Brooke
Comment from nomi338
Wow! Just when I think that you cannot possibly top the last great poem that you have written, you come up with a top notch winner like this, totally hitting it out of the park. I cannot even find the words to adequately express how impressed I am with the skill, the creativity that gave birth to this great poem. Just wow!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Wow! Just when I think that you cannot possibly top the last great poem that you have written, you come up with a top notch winner like this, totally hitting it out of the park. I cannot even find the words to adequately express how impressed I am with the skill, the creativity that gave birth to this great poem. Just wow!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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nomi, I'm honored by your comments and grateful for your generous sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from Joan E.
Here's to many more library adventures for Sawyer! I bet he adored this rhymed description of what he imagined and was captured by his mother in the photo. I too wonder if all the characters meet up at night at the bottom of the book drop! Thanks for sharing your wonderful, whimsical tale with bits of alliteration as well. Smiles- Joan
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Here's to many more library adventures for Sawyer! I bet he adored this rhymed description of what he imagined and was captured by his mother in the photo. I too wonder if all the characters meet up at night at the bottom of the book drop! Thanks for sharing your wonderful, whimsical tale with bits of alliteration as well. Smiles- Joan
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Joan, I'm so pleased you enjoyed this and entertain the same thoughts :-) Thanks so much. Brooke
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I knew you might based on your profession! lol -Joan
Comment from Tegan1311
Your poems are always so wonderfully done. I really love how you took something as simple as a book drop and made it come alive. You really seem to have an insight into a child's mind (and I don't mean that in any kind of negative way. It's very creative). Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Your poems are always so wonderfully done. I really love how you took something as simple as a book drop and made it come alive. You really seem to have an insight into a child's mind (and I don't mean that in any kind of negative way. It's very creative). Well done.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Tegan, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. It is a cute little one. Children's imaginations come alive when they read books. They would be likely to imagine wheat happened when the book was dropped into no where. Great work.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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I love the picture. It is a cute little one. Children's imaginations come alive when they read books. They would be likely to imagine wheat happened when the book was dropped into no where. Great work.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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nelliesellie, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Angel Debbie
This is wonderful!! Great imaginations you have with everything you do! This library drop in a very fun read.
Great rhymes. Thanks for sharing and I bet Sawyer will love it too!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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This is wonderful!! Great imaginations you have with everything you do! This library drop in a very fun read.
Great rhymes. Thanks for sharing and I bet Sawyer will love it too!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Angel Debbie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from TOMORAL
I am laughing right now. This put a big smile on my face, and for a few moments you took me out of my doldrums to visit the land of the book drop. Ingenious, the way your delightful mind works....
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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I am laughing right now. This put a big smile on my face, and for a few moments you took me out of my doldrums to visit the land of the book drop. Ingenious, the way your delightful mind works....
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Tomoral, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from acerisestory
You are so creative, Brooke! To write such an imaginative poem about a book drop: who would have imagined? And I thought "Pilloried" was about as creative as you could get! Great use of alliteration: mysterious/mansions; munches/mountains, and perfect rhyming. Thanks again for sharing another poem (and Sawyer) with us. Take care. Alana
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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You are so creative, Brooke! To write such an imaginative poem about a book drop: who would have imagined? And I thought "Pilloried" was about as creative as you could get! Great use of alliteration: mysterious/mansions; munches/mountains, and perfect rhyming. Thanks again for sharing another poem (and Sawyer) with us. Take care. Alana
Comment Written 05-Jul-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2014
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Alana, thanks so very much :-) Brooke
